Reviews for Nacho Cheese
Guest chapter 1 . 2/19/2016
You nailed the characters perfectly. Especially loved the ending. Good job!
Lilybud chapter 1 . 12/22/2015
Short, sweet, showing Joel finally opening, AND EXACTLY WHAT I NEED BECAUSE I JUST FINISHED TOO! THE FEELS! I think some of the dialogue would have landed better w/o the descriptions surrounding it, but otherwise this captured a near-perfect bonding moment!
XxxAccountNoLongerInUsexxX chapter 1 . 10/2/2014
So cute! I love how you wrote everything with such vigorous simplicity. (It's awe-so inspiring) :D
catzlovecheeze chapter 1 . 8/14/2014
This was really cute! Nice job!
hi chapter 1 . 6/26/2014
aww...that was so cute! i loved it! keep writing my good friend!
Boo chapter 1 . 3/4/2014
nomzoms chapter 1 . 1/4/2014
i finished it last week and i'm still wallowing lmao, cute story tho 3
Lily chapter 1 . 12/7/2013
Aaaaaaaagh, dude don't tell me that! D: I'm 91% through it (and that was with deliberate dragging out) and I can already sense the horrifically sad ending! :'( But anyway, this fic was absolutely brilliant, you really captured those quieter moments they have sometimes, and both their personalities - you're a fantastic writer! :) Keep up the awesomesauce work and DFTBA! XD
sreii chapter 1 . 7/27/2013
I cried too, when the game ended. :'(

I really love your story, and your writing style!
DancingInMyUnderwear chapter 1 . 7/12/2013
Hilarious, excellently written and fits well into the story. A brilliant one shot.
Acayaba chapter 1 . 7/11/2013
Such a sweet story :]
I just LOVE when Joel says "baby girl"!
Rumblereader chapter 1 . 7/9/2013
HURRRRR"baby girl"
silvijao chapter 1 . 7/5/2013
This was an amazing one shot! I would love for you to do a series! Good luck :))
xxXTheAngelicDemonXxx chapter 1 . 7/3/2013
Cute! :3
MegaDiary123 chapter 1 . 7/3/2013
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