Reviews for Beautiful
DobbyLovesSocks chapter 1 . 2/14/2014
it was... the ending though

Wow. Okay, um. That was great, Laura. The ending was painful and sad in a sort of numbing way, because you didn't do it the way people do just to get rid of a character, or just because it's the saddest ending you could think of. You wrote it because it fit with the story, with the emotions, with real people. Because you explained how everything was just staying the same in her life and it wasn't good but it wasn't necessarily bad, and then... it all happened at once. And you wrote the ending really, really well. It was sudden, but it didn't seem too abrupt.

You took a really difficult thing to write about and wrote it beautifully, and... wow, again.

I love how you wrote Parvati as so encouraging and reassuring and never giving up even when she knew it wasn't helping, because it gave it all a sort of hopeful feel.

ii... i don't know how to end this so goodbye
that ending though have i mentioned how well written it was
yellow 14 chapter 1 . 7/2/2013
Really sad and tragic. Keep writing
IforIgnore chapter 1 . 7/2/2013
This was so sad and emotional. :)
rosevioletsmile123 chapter 1 . 7/2/2013
Great job! It's very well-written and you show Parvati's and Lavender's sadness beautifully.