Reviews for One Divine Mess
the alpha phoenix chapter 9 . 12/29/2010
Brilliant fic. It's entertaining throughout and the ending is great. It really is an awesome read.
radio wires chapter 9 . 11/24/2010
This fic is awesome. It made me actually laugh and entertained me! Something rare in attempted humor/romance fics. You made everything believable and the dialog great! I also absolutely loved that you paired Mimi with Koushirou! I love Koumi. Mimato is just extremely wrong to me. The only thing I didn't like about this fic, was how much of a...hornball TK is, hahaha. Just kidding, but TK having romantic feelings for anyone besides Hikari weirds me out. But I'm a takari fan. :)
ARCtheElite chapter 9 . 11/25/2008
Bravo. Very well done, though I would have liked to see Iori's part a little more in the story; he seems slightly shunned despite being the only rational character in the entire story.

I'm glad you still come on from time to time. This story anyway (I have yet to read the other ones) is one of the few masterpieces on this site. It is definitely not crap, but you are your own worst critic, so there's little to be said.

You had a very good idea, one I hadn't seen before, although the concept of TK being a nice guy is nothing new to me (it may have been when you wrote this story). I like how you played it out though. Normally it's just Kari or whoever happens to be paired up with him dreaming about his niceness (and looks too).

It isn't the ROFL-type humour like some of the other stories I've read ("Cui bono?", "This is why I don't drink", and "Ken Ichijouji: Closet Headbanger", to name a few), but I did appreciate the irony-like humour here. It was very well done, not too much but not too little at the same time.

In addition to all I've just written, this story seemed realistic. Timespans aside (successfully hooking up 3 girls in 3 days is a REALLY tall order, I don't think anyone has ever succeeded in doing that yet), everything was realistic. Above all, the character portrayals were realistic, with nobody being either super-perfect or a total bitch.

Once again, bravo. A masterpiece.
Daiguren chapter 9 . 8/21/2007
wow O_o nice ending? ..

i like how this is all in Takeru's pov and how it's like a flashback thing, it's the top of my favorites so far! i look forward to reading more of your fanfics!
thnku4dvenom chapter 9 . 6/11/2007
i dont normally review stories and all but this is just too good! i mean wow! but i kinda wanted mimi and matt to go together but since youre the author and all... but its still a pretty impressive story... i likes the other pairings too... just rips my heart in two if kari and tk dont end up together! i really like the way you write... really witty and funny...
silverknight426 chapter 9 . 5/6/2007
Marvelous! Simply Marvelous!

I really have to say that this fic is one of the most cleverly and excellently written fics I have ever read! One of, if not the, best fics I have ever read! Really loved it and I'm checking out you're other fics!
Luthair Paendrag chapter 9 . 2/11/2007
Bravo, simply wonderful. Forget mainstream authors, some of the best stories I have read are on this site and this is one of them.
cookie chapter 1 . 6/30/2006
I like it, completely hillarious so far...

But seriously, TK, i know your not real and all, but seriously... what an idiot... **tsk tsk**
Derek chapter 1 . 5/4/2006
I''ve read currently 3 of 5 of your stories.. all being the digimon ones...

you said you don't check yer fan fic anymore... but haha... i guess i'm doing this for no reason...

I love how you write your stories... it's pretty unique...

still a big fan of yours! especially tear's in Cyber Heaven..

hope u get a book out soon!
joeshen chapter 9 . 8/19/2005
This has genius written all over it... I haven't laughed this hard since Daisuke's expression when Patamon evolved to Angemon...

Very nice.
Nephest chapter 9 . 2/28/2005
Boy did I find this one funny! I haven't laughed so hard since, oh, maybe the humorous bits of Tamers Forever?

But seriously, this was a wonderfully funny fic. I loved all the little allusions to the show and it's epilogue, and the general comedy was great. The ending was superb too, hehehe...
Is the Pope Catholic chapter 9 . 1/4/2005
Wow! I've got to say this story makes me all giggly inside. Damn. I love how Takeru is such a sweet, adorable guy. Your story was pretty comedic too. I loved it. I hope you write more fics like these in the future. Heh I know this is late, but I want more!
TheRealityWeWanted chapter 4 . 11/30/2004
This is a cool story. I just love your writing style but so far the story is indeed predictable. I guessed every pairing in this fic and so far I'm right. Everyone is getting hooked up with their usual counterparts. Despite that fact, I like this story. The couplings are quite common but the way you go about explaining everything is amazing and hilarious! Lol. Keep up the good work.
custard colored fur chapter 9 . 7/2/2004
OMG! I absolutly loved this story, it's being added to my favorites for sure! I don't know why, but your story reminded me of the movie 'Risky Business', don't ask me why though, because I"m not really sure. It was so great the way it was written, it seemed like real thoughts Takeru would be thinking. You're a really great author, you know that? I loved the couplings and the slight hints you gave about their futurs, like Daisuke making a living on noodles, or Yamato becoming a astronaut. I seem to be rambling, so I'll stop talking now... You're a really great author though and this story was absolutly amazing... I'm REALLY done talking now, so ja!
JTNeal chapter 9 . 5/5/2004
FANTASTIC!
Marvelous I say, by far the best fic I have read on .
I started on when I was 10 so I've sort of grown up with it, and have never read a better fic. Not only did I find most of the lines extremely humorous, but the wit just apalled me.
I've been a bit dry the past couple of years, wondering why I should actually hang out here. This story will have be in a 24 hour rave to find more of its kind and hopefully quite soon too.
I also love how you capitalised Fate as a proper noun... Says alot about yourself, absolutely splendid. Wow.
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