|Reviews for When Andy's Away|
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/24/2013
Hi. Same guest who (ill sign up someday) comment in your previous fanfic of Kyo/Mai. I see some little bit he/she mistakes in the fanfic. To be honest, I play not only as Kyo, Mai, and others in KOF even Andy. There's even a doujin of Andy and Mai, but hey all is gonna change. I agree with one comment of your previous fanfic of the two flamebringers and of course have an awesome wedding or have them on the same team in KOF tournaments (which I play as the two flamebringers with mr Karate I even drew Kyo/Mai including Kyo/Yuki) or rescue Mai from bad guys. I'm along with you for flameshipping dude there should be more Kyo/Mai!
Have a good Merry Christmas and new year from a fan
| shinKyoKusanagi chapter 1 . 11/28/2013
I like this story, except the part where Kyo's afraid of Andy, he's not afraid of anyone.
Anyway, Kyo and Mai are perfect, they should end up together, end of the story.
| Drake Zeppeli chapter 1 . 8/7/2013
A great story indeed. Well done getting everyone's personalities spot on. Although both Kyo and Mai were a bit OOC. I have nothing to criticize. Peace out and good luck.
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