Wonderful :) Nice job delving into Tom's mind; the things you write seem to be a lot like something that could run through his head. "He wasn't all too bad looking, either. Just not anything to compare with Tom's features" and "He rippled with muscle, which would have been a considerable advantage if he could think fast enough to throw a punch before an opponent simply walked away..." hahaha :D

Not too bad. I'll wait next chapter ;)

Wow. Tom is a dick. Oh, wait...that makes perfect sense. It's not wrong to fit more into Tom't POV. I often find it easier to write from a darker point of view. There's less going into sentiment or wanting justify thinking or doing dark things. It's just bam, that's how it is. So anyway, good, good chapter!

Oooo! I love the playfulness of the boys. I suspect something deep in Louis' playfulness with Bilius though. ;) Excellent chapter! Great lead up to the first encounter. Can't wait to see more!

Thank you! The Happy Ramadan comment :D
Really interesting, are you going to make Hermione regarded as pretty/beautiful? And how are you going to have the Slytherin boys react to her?

Definitely interested in reading more. Thanks for what you've written so far.

Ooo. I'm sure Hermione will cause quite a scandal with her fixing the clothes! ;) Good chapter. I liked that she thought of her old roommates. I also like that Bilius is there. Why? Because I said so.

I think this is great. i don't feel like you have to explain your writing. when it works, it just flows for us. and there really is nothing to complain about here except the fact that you have not continued! these chapters all put together seem like they would make one but I guess that's just preference. you have really nice writing and I can't wait to read more.

Chapters like these, "fillers," as you call them, are necessary to set the scene. They add detail and make the story more interesting as a whole. Great job! We all love you, too :P

Really nice! You're a great writer.

The title?
Umm... How about 'Quam Oportet' (which means 'how it must be')?
Or 'De Cetero Emendare' (which means 'to mend the future')?
Or 'Ignotæ Magicae' (which means 'an unknown magic', refering to both the magic used by the centaurs, and the "magic" known as love). (A variant of this is 'Magicae Ignotum', meaning 'a magic unknown'.)

This was a good chapter. Not much I can say in ways of improvement.

Spectacular so far :) I love how detailed your writing is. The plot concept is cool and I can't wait for any updates. Good luck!

i loved it you should write more