|Reviews for Dead Inside|
| squekenheim chapter 27 . 11/2
Oh my goodness
This story has been amazing! And I'm so happy now .
| squekenheim chapter 5 . 10/31
I love the story so far! I think giving Sonic background and actual REASONS why he doesn't like kissing or affection (other than "ew cooties") was a very smart move! It gives his character a lot of depth and I just love it! I love that Amy is just like "keep it cool, for Sonic. You can be calm, for Sonic." Haha
I really wanted to tell you that I think you nailed Shadow's POV. He sounded like himself in his head and out loud. Which just shows his personality more. He is the Ultimate Lifeform. What's the sense in being someone else for show?
But seriously, I'm excited to continue reading! Your writing is also very good! And I find myself chuckling at your author notes haha :)
| Dharma chapter 11 . 8/25
Jeez... I thought they were gonna dislike eachother forever!... BTW Im loving the story. Keep up the great job.
| Guest chapter 20 . 7/17
| Guest chapter 13 . 7/17
I absolutely love this story ️
| Guest chapter 12 . 7/17
| best drama chapter 11 . 6/12
| LUV IT chapter 6 . 6/11
Now this is the kind of dark sonic i want to see more of!
| Tre chapter 22 . 3/21
can you add my ca.. lol just kidding but i think it will be a boy like yours :)
| Guest chapter 20 . 3/21
:) :) :) :) :) :) :) :)
| Guest chapter 13 . 3/21
| Guest chapter 12 . 3/20
| Bonniefangel2005 chapter 1 . 1/5
Good start off of the CH.
| Secretive Owl chapter 1 . 11/8/2016
Sonic we do not just do that because we want to let out our feelings, well for me any way, I use my diary for story inspiration and all that so ha. Good bye. Nana jk i will continue reading ya story.
| Guest chapter 27 . 9/9/2016
Shit. This chapter had me very teary holy crap. Also I live Shadow and Amy's relationship btw...