|Reviews for Parallels and Divergences|
| Guest chapter 2 . 2/27
Dee1600: The idea of the goat as a maid of honour is hilarious! I am looking forward to the next installment! Cheers!
| Little Bird chapter 2 . 1/30
O.k. while I wait for the updates on Sailor, have been working my way through your other stories. Love this, and once Sailor is done, I hope you come back to it.
Also am terribly in love with your story To Begin Anew and hope that is on the burner too for updating.
Am I being pushy? I think I am but I cannot help it.
| quaff chapter 2 . 1/25
It's good to see a strong Spock in relation to his father. I don't know why this works so well for me. Thank you for writing it.
| Oxford chapter 2 . 1/6
First, just read Avery harsh review from someone called Minnie. She( or is it a he?) complains about the use of bold words, is not adding anything useful whatsoever. I personally think the use of emphasis with bold words adds to the flow and tone of the story. It sometimes reflects sarcasm.
I am alarmed at Sarek's response, it's as if he cannot have Amanda anymore and the life they had together, so should Spock be deprived of that life. He is being extremely selfish. So he marries a Vulcan, and I presume not for love but truly for logic this time, he would enforce Spock to do the same. He should do his duty and produce many more sons and leave Spock alone. I hope the 5 years will knock some sense into him. I wonder what Spock Prime thinks of the situation? Spock though is a very determined man, and it seems Sarek's has forgotten what sort of man Spock is. Spock does not waver in his convictions. In the meantime Kirk is just such a great friend to both of them.
I can't wait for the wedding, and hope all goes well without any further interference from Sarek.
| tracysgate chapter 2 . 12/29/2013
This is a lovely series. Looking forward to the wedding :)
| Avril Danova2013 chapter 2 . 11/8/2013
I read this in shock. Sarek so unreasonable and Jim Kirk so mature. Not to mention Spock, so sure of himself and who he is. Uhura seems very pliable. Cannot wait to see how you end this story.
| WeirdLittleStories chapter 2 . 10/28/2013
An interesting beginning! More, please?
| Bergamotte chapter 2 . 10/3/2013
Wow, Sarek remarried and Spock ordered home to marry a Vulcan . . . that's a bombshell. It does appear that, even if Spock disobeys his father, Sarek stands ready to produce another heir with his new wife. I can't imagine that she would ever replace Amanda in his affections.
| Guest chapter 2 . 8/16/2013
please continue ..best fun in a long time!
| Guest chapter 2 . 8/6/2013
Love, love, love this story to bits. Hoping you are able to get back to it, it's so well written and I'm dying to read more. Another brilliant work from you, Pat. Cheers.
| lisahg0368 chapter 2 . 7/27/2013
Hurry up and finish! Please!
| T'Sara chapter 2 . 7/13/2013
I think deep down Sarek must be really hurting as well to be acting like this...I do hope he eventually comes around. I hope you update soon.
| Minnie chapter 2 . 7/12/2013
I don't understand why you bold some words. If it's for emphasis it doesn't seem so (or necessary, really) because you're emphasizing words that don't need it. I just wanted to point out that it is over the top and slightly annoying, taking away from the reading process. Other than that the story itself is OK, a little OOC on both Spock and Uhura but that is to be expected with fanfiction.
| TOSoldtimer chapter 2 . 7/9/2013
Can't wait to see where this goes. Does Sarek back down, or does he declare Spock V'tosh'katur and exile him? Looking forward to your next post.
| x-shadow-x-kisses-x chapter 2 . 7/9/2013
Two more chapter to go? Hooray! :') this is great :) great grammar, good flow, and you've pregty much kept spock in character, which most people tend not to do in this sort of situation :) i applaud you!