|Reviews for He Who Has Been Denied Love and Peace|
| Shincore chapter 2 . 11/20
LET NARUTO WIN PLEASE EVEN IF HE'S EVIL
| doubledamn chapter 1 . 10/11
Amazing. There are a quite a few 'evil Naruto' or 'smart Naruto' fics out there. This is the first manipulative bastard Naruto fic I've seen that isn't a very poorly written excuse for NC-17 material.
It's a rare thing to find someone who can write the villain, have everyone know he's the villain, have him gloat about being the villain, and yet, still have the reader/audience root for them. Well done. You have great talent and potential. Keep it up.
| Boomer 001 chapter 1 . 9/29
Holy crap this first chapter was good!
| DraxAQN chapter 7 . 9/4
Great job the chapter. I am really looking forward to more updates.
| Guest chapter 7 . 8/30
Dude keep updating love your stuff
| Dragoncyber22 chapter 7 . 8/25
A good story, and it has a very good plot. If you make a continuation or continue
the same story will be very cool and that the continuation is very makes you a great fanfic writer, and please continue the story
| justafan chapter 7 . 8/18
well if the anime reaches that point i hope it is more epic your words made it sound like ywach got curvestomped in one hit like a bitch can only pray the anime does it better probably not but still.
| naruto chapter 7 . 8/14
great chapter keep it up
| bankai777 chapter 7 . 8/14
Will Naruto kill Ichigo eventually.
| Guest chapter 7 . 8/13
Well good chapter keep up the good work looking forward to the next chapter.
| TheMysteriousOtaku chapter 7 . 8/13
dam i am loving this keep up the good work
| justafan chapter 2 . 8/13
i love this naruto the only thing that could make it better is if he had a harem haha.
| Shinano chapter 7 . 8/13
I must say that all chapters have published until now are pretty good, hope the continuation
| TRm chapter 7 . 8/13
This was a good, yet at the same time disappointing chapter; the visuals and dialogue were done and the fights were shown with the right amount of detail to be descriptive but not drag.
However you severely weakened the Bleach characters from what they should be able to do, e.g.:
- Kenpachi could probably have tanked Kirin at the beginning of Bleach, though he would have been badly injured, I doubt it would have done much post Blood War. And the fact that he opened with releasing his zanpakuto AND ganging up on someone goes against his character as someone who enjoys fighting one-on-one.
- Soifon's base stats easily outshine those of random members of ROOT and zanpakuto has pretty much free reign in the inner world, Suzembachi would not have needed assistance
- neither Shinji nor Kyoraku made any significant use of their Zapakuto but I suppose that was necessary if you wanted Sasuke to win as he lacks the innate genius of Aizen to be able to work around an inverted world and he wouldn't be able to catch on fast enough to Shunsui's games; he simply can't handle that kind of mind-fuckery
There's also Sasuke suddenly being this powerful, now I will admit that, minus Shunsui, canon-Sasuke might be able to beat those opponents but that is only the case with post-series Sasuke with all of the upgrades and experience in using them
Basically, a lot of this chapter felt as though you really didn't like the ending of Bleach and decided to take it out on the characters of your story without giving an in-story reason for why the opponents suddenly suck... kind of like what happened with the ending of Bleach
| s.k.f.f.f chapter 7 . 8/13