|Reviews for Opportunity for Change|
| PatchsFallenAngel chapter 45 . 1/30
I loved it. Sure, it was a little hard to read with the spelling, grammar and puncuation mistakes, but the plot and the characters were great. If you were to go back over this story and maybe polish it off, it would be a story I'd be wiling to pay money to read. The ending was perfect. You gave the characters a happily ever after, even if it wasn't with the people most of your readers hoped for. Secretly, I'm a Bella/Jasper shiper. Actually, I tend to ship Bella with a lot of characters who aren't Edward. However, there was a tiny part of me that hoped Edward would get the love of his life, and I guess in some way he did with Anna. I'm so glad I read this story. Thank you for putting in the effort to update and complete this fic.
| Guest chapter 7 . 1/28
I just have to say this because it's really bothering me-"I voted for blank impressed me the most" should have "who" replace the blank, not "whom." The "who" is the subject of "impressed me the most," which takes priority over the prepositional phrase. Instead of just the blank being the object of the prepositional phrase, "blank impressed me the most" is the entire object of the prepositional phrase. Thus, blank must be replaced by "who" as the subject of "impressed me the most."
| Guest chapter 30 . 1/23
I really hopes he brakes up with her!
| Guest chapter 28 . 1/23
I know Edward is with Tanya because of his reputation but I wish he would brake up with her. She's a b*tch (sorry about my language)
| Guest chapter 22 . 1/21
Team Edward all the way even if I know what happens(I read the reviews). I remember in another story they hated each other so much it broke my heart cuz I ship Edward and Bella. Whatever, I should at least give Bella and Jasper a try
| EndlessSugar chapter 45 . 1/21
I have know reached the end of the story and I've got to say I actually enjoyed it, I usually read Edward and Bella couple stories, but lately I've been reading different types of story, most Edward and Bella story seems to be the same. As much as I would love to have Edward and Bella together, it makes perfect sense for jasper and Bella to be together in this story. The only thing I would say I about this story is the many grammatical errors, and to be honest it was really off putting, but you had a wonderful storyline that I had to get through it so I manage to just suck it up; try getting a beta or get an outsiders point of view, it was ironic to see that the character in this story was so smart, so her writing was almost flawless yet the writer's writing wasn't up to scratch, I am sure that if there wasn't as much error as there were you would so much more reviews. Love your story and I can see you have potential for even greater stories and I can't wait to read more.
| Guest chapter 8 . 1/20
I feel like he is going to like her either as a friend or more
| Mollysoaphie123 chapter 45 . 1/19
Oh my gosh I'm so sad that this story had to end! But the ending is amazing! This really is one of the greatest stories I've read on this website. :)
I'll answer some of the questions for kicks and giggles:
Why do I write?:(I wrote this but had to shorten it. It WAY too long) I write simply because I love it. I honestly can't explain, probably because I'm new to writing in the fanfiction world(I'm used to reading in it). I get this feeling when I write. I think it's inspiration, but I's kinda addicted to that feeling that I only seem to get when writing a story that I love.(Well, that sounded weird)
What drew me to this story?: I actually found this story by accident. I don't really read T rated stories very often(almost never), I usually read the M rated ones. But I was setting up the filter thing for stories and I accidentally clicked 'Rated T'. The summary intrigued me and by the time I figured out that it was rated T, I had already read two chapter. Now let me tell ya somethin', usually when I realize that I'm reading a T rated thing, I'll just stop reading it( I don't really know why), but your story was really was really interesting to me.
Sorry about the longness of this review.
Thanks again for writing such an amazing story!
:) :D ;)
| bluedreamyeyes chapter 14 . 1/19
I really like your story. I've started reading it several hours ago and it's pretty good.
I like the idea and the way how it's written but there's one thing - lots of grammar mistakes (as: heard talk, he is suppose, should have drove...).
I'm no grammar Nazi but it makes otherwise a good story bit less enjoyable and it's a pity.
I'm not a Native speaker so I can't honestly say that I'm always right but I'm trying to do my best.
I hope I didn't offend you with this and I'm gonna continue reading...
| TwilighterSam1989 chapter 45 . 1/19
First of all Im team Edward and i really would have loved it if Bella And Edward were an couple now in your story. But... Even though i loved your story and it totally makes sense Bella chooses Jasper.. But heey they are not real.. So suck it up people. This is her story if you complain about it do it yourself then. Whatever i can understand people can nie disappointed but get over it.. Everybody knows this story was awesome. Also without Bella And Edward as an couple.
| twitipat chapter 45 . 1/18
"Why did I make Tanya the girlfriend? I know we don't want to believe it, but Edward and Tanya got together in Twilight. It has to be a reason she was all over him. I thought it was fitting for this story."
That isn't a true statement. In canon, Edward and Tanya are were never together. Just because she was all over him means nothing. She wrote him as a virginal vampire. It's her story, not yours. It doesn't matter what you believe. If she wrote it, it's fact.
| Guest chapter 45 . 1/18
You could have let people know that this is not E/B story in the first place like every authors do... (ummm, yes they do...) and let them decides if they gonna continue reading it. Putting the main characters named like Bella, Edward,Jasper,Tanya are misleading...JS
Well, good luck on your next story, and please just put the two main character names next time, just a suggestion.
| L4N498 chapter 45 . 1/18
This was a great story! But I won't lie and say I'm happy with Bella choosing Jasper! I started this story thinking it was a Edward/Bella story and it turned into a Jasper/Bella so I'm rather disappointed
| aduty24 chapter 44 . 1/18
I call BS gerrr I wanted Edward to win her heart. Poop :(
| Guest chapter 44 . 1/18
If I knew E and B are not going to end up together, I wouldn't have read the rest altogether. To be perfectly honest, I only read the story because I thought E and B will be together in the end. For me, the story was more of a "Jealous Edward" and "Oblivious Bella".
Guest, just took the words out of my mouth but I felt need need to post it, but I needed to add that it was a really really disappointed ending and I would not have waisted my time on not reading a Edward and Bella story.