|Reviews for Tornado|
| Guest chapter 13 . 9/5
Please continue this it is so interesting! I've read it at least 5 times so far. I have greatly enjoyed your take on kingdom Hearts :) I really do hope you continue this!
| Solomon07 chapter 13 . 7/14
Reading from Chapter 1 to 13, what you written down in the story has got me a bit thinking in the Storyline of Kingdom Hearts. Especially around the connections between Vanitas, Sora, Roxas, and Ventus.
I have no idea what's going to be done about that in Kingdom Hearts 3, but from what I gathered, you made a plausible theory about the four's connection within this story.
...as for the moment, I leave it at that. The story in itself was, and still is an interesting read.
I'm curious as to how the relations between Ventus and the others would go, as well as what Sora and Vanitas will do given their current situation. And what's more, I guess this is a simple reminder that I should pay attention to character's relations to each other, and how things might not be so constructive. For both sides, and not just the good.
| Jibanyan with Komasan chapter 13 . 6/29
So can Sora summon the Unversed?
| kiwi chapter 13 . 6/16
puddor i hate you
| SoraROCK chapter 13 . 3/13
I'm begging you to write this story more, it's getting interesting:)
| B. T. Emmett chapter 13 . 12/23/2014
The one thing that impresses me the most is how everything about the connection between Sora, Vanitas, Ventus, and Roxas just CLICKS together. Seriously, this is epic mind-blowing material.
I always liked telling myself that Vanitas isn't exactly pure evil. But I didn't have anything to backup my claim. Then lo and behold I find this fic and now I finally feel supported. A thousand kudos to you!
Looking forward to the next chapter! :D
| Shinigami Merchant chapter 13 . 10/12/2014
Please update soon this is a really exhillerating read XD
| Guest chapter 13 . 6/5/2014
Great job! Keep it up!
| Hayles1 chapter 1 . 5/31/2014
I adore this concept of Vanitas inside Sora.
I'll admit I've already read this fic numerous times since first finding and favouriting it. But your recent update made me decide to go back and review every chapter...or at least try.
Also, very much like and appreciate how your layout is. Not the dreaded "Wall of Text" that burns the eyes, and not the reverse of sentences instead of paragraphs. I like the sizing of your paragraphs. Language use is good and gets the point across well. So constructive critique complete!
I'm off to re-read the next chapter or so before trying to construct another review.
| Fluoricia chapter 13 . 5/29/2014
Been waiting for so long... Ventus's action really is a surprise and...did Riku just scare a dark-mode-Sora away? Like, a kid trying to pull a prank found by his patent on scene? That's cute! XD
| Maximal chapter 13 . 5/29/2014
Make riku beat up ventus for that
| MC-Ryter chapter 13 . 5/27/2014
It's been such a long time. I've went through family, home and friend problems and got an account. Wow, time has really gone by fast. I forgive you, but what took you so long? Write on!
| Ern Estine 13624 chapter 13 . 5/27/2014
interesting can't wait for more
| kage kitsune no yami chapter 13 . 5/27/2014
Wow, just wow. This chapter was absolutely amazing, especially the fight between Sora and Roxas. That was very well done. I am so very excited about the next chapter. This was definitely worth the wait:D
| Gamma Cavy chapter 13 . 5/27/2014
oh boy, this may count as a 'great job breaking it hero' moment from Ventus. I doubt Riku will be pleased with him when he gets an explanation.