|Reviews for Tenderness|
| Kein Sylvan chapter 1 . 7/3/2013
I always knew there was something between these 2. Too bad for Soiree, he likes that Meyrink chick a lot XD
Ok, now serious. I liked your one shot. Very well told and really, if it weren't for their ending in kofmi2, I would actually think this as a possible scenario. Like overall the german accent feeling you gave to Luise.
Well, I'm not an english native speaker, so I couldn't be of much help pointing some grammar mistakes, but as far as I read, I didn't see any.
Oh, I also read the Kyo/Mai/Andy story. Kinda weird for my taste, nothing really personal, just I don't imagine that scenario. But anyway, it was a fun story, and after reading this story, I'll give your other story a chance (I'm an incorregible romantic).