|Reviews for Naruto: broken relationship|
| reconghost5 chapter 1 . 9/5/2013
*clears throat* FIX YOUR FUCKING GRAMMAR! Thank you
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/3/2013
Your spelling and grammar gave me aids.
| Anon chapter 1 . 7/3/2013
Please have someone beta this, very difficult to read or understand.
| kyuubi's goodside chapter 2 . 7/5/2013
its OK but its rushed for one thing and what exactly did they all do. That was so bad to reach this point of Naruto wanting to ease his memories. Second kybaai i think u meant kybuui. Though overall its good plot wise i just suggest checking out other stories and seeing how other authors get their story to flow and take notes from them. Then add it to your story.
| Goku js chapter 2 . 7/4/2013
If I was Naruto I would broke mentally killed everyone
| Von Kreuz chapter 2 . 7/4/2013
I will not be rude or something but there are still some mistakes in it.
Kybaai... you mean Kyuubi or?
For the chapters... nice idea I have to say.
| 25BAM50 chapter 1 . 7/3/2013
nice start but you miss spell Sasuke name a lot of times