|Reviews for Fools Forever|
| Browlax chapter 1 . 1/23
Oh wow, a pleasing beginning! You put every detail of Michael at the start! His heavy breathing, his ability to hide in shadows and not be seen. Love it!
I'm gonna continue reading these chapters right now. xD.
| essicaohnsonX chapter 9 . 9/24/2013
The beginning of this chapter reminds me of Potters Puppet Pals "The mysterious Ticking Noise"
| kakashishot chapter 12 . 9/22/2013
Playing keep away with kruegers knifes nice. Omg those fluffballs sure like to make a mess
| kakashishot chapter 11 . 8/24/2013
The guys ran into a UFO when u said that the first thing I thought was of them meeting a predator but that's not going to happen. Them predys like to hid curse the clocking devices. At least they had a fun light show and got the lights rite. Anumals have a strange instinct to know when something weird going to happen also reminds me a a twilight episode. K later
| MegaKiraraLover chapter 10 . 8/16/2013
uh-oh. emphasis on sleeping.
| kakashishot chapter 10 . 8/16/2013
I feel bad for willow its not fun losing a family member. The pain stays with you forever and u have to keep on living cuz that's what your loved one would want not to mess up your life or nothing. I like the romance your doing with them and the three ghosts. (Lucky willow she gets a hug from Jason). Yeah I could tell that micheal has a soft spot for maria. Freddy fun to hang with but I can't tell who he likes. Well keep going with the Romance. K later
| kakashishot chapter 9 . 8/13/2013
damn what an adventure 1 the. Guys are fooling around making noise. Freddy gets stepped on ha ha. 2 bring. Up dead spirits to with. The board to only be someones grandmother. Then he. Makes Freddy mad by the stupid question and last get. Stuck in a zombie game. Wait they can't hurt voorhees any cuz he's a zombie rite? Well Freddy got lost. Poor Freddy. Micheal cool in this story as well as jason great ghosts k later
| kakashishot chapter 8 . 8/7/2013
Well that was a fun adventure. No haunted ghost or nothing. Just trying to save some beloved pets. Ooh maybe they can have a game day playing board games and they get sucked into it.
| kakashishot chapter 7 . 8/6/2013
These guys can't seem to have a normal day now can they Eh Its fun like to get scared and they live for adventure. Wonder where theyll go next time. That story wad great at the end it freaked me out. Well that's all I have later
| MegaKiraraLover chapter 7 . 8/5/2013
oh god, michael's remake is GIANT, like bigger than jason...that'd be funny to see the "original's" reactions to xD
| kakashishot chapter 6 . 7/30/2013
Cops argue about what mikes ging to do then they have to crash through the barn. Now there be careful. I'm glad jason was at least trying to have fun
| kakashishot chapter 5 . 7/24/2013
Ok when u first stated the Jersey devil my first though was did it come back to scare people or something cuz I heard of him thanks to scholastic(have book Americans most haunted true scary stories:) so now I'm curious if it came back from all that hiding. The guys were really brave to protect them facing off against Jersey itself. Ok when they went swimming was jason in shorts( wiggles eyebrows) aw poor micheal I wish Icould give him a hug. Now freddy PUT A DAMN SHIRT ON ok. No nore exploring for them until its safe ok later
| evolution-500 chapter 1 . 7/24/2013
Not a bad start. The beginning of this chapter was actually quite good. While I am not overly familiar with the HALLOWEEN movies, I'm pretty certain that Michael wouldn't be familiar with either Jason Voorhees or Freddy Krueger.
| the Last Flowerchild chapter 1 . 7/23/2013
Finally got a break from work :P Anyway, great first chapter! I'll read the rest as soon as I can, and I'm sorry about the delay...poor Michael being all confused. I wanna hug him :3
| kakashishot chapter 4 . 7/20/2013
I drew a picture of jason making fun of Freddy but Jason took his hat(not my idea came when I was reading exited or afraid:p) so that reminded my of my drawing :). Micheal is the the mature one of all three nice. Seems those two will always fight. Ok how could three ghost be scared of another ghost or what ever it is that scared them. Ooh is it that boy from scary movie 4 k later