|Reviews for Big Momma's Wheels|
| Jedi Skysinger chapter 1 . 7/8/2013
And you said you couldn't write! Great job, Jane! Just my kind of BN story, a behind the scenes peek that answers a question we were all wondering about! Keep up the good work!
| DKougar chapter 1 . 7/5/2013
Those who know Sam well (& you are certainly one of them) know that his car is a barometer of his well being. It shows the current state of his relationship with his "sugar momma" & the current state of her bank account!
BN is a story about Michael's quest & how he evolves. But Sam is also evolving from semi-alcoholic boy toy to, once again, the officer, gentleman, & honorable warrior.
Well done! You've written about a subject you understand so completely & shown us something new about him! Good job!
| Loretta chapter 1 . 7/5/2013
Wow - for a first story you did a great job! You totally nailed Sam's character. Your analogies are great too. Would love to read more!
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/4/2013
| LN8866 chapter 1 . 7/4/2013
That was totally AMAZING! See...you ARE an awesome writer! Keep it up and welcome to the world of fanfiction...your newest addiction!
| southpawokpoet chapter 1 . 7/4/2013
Gentle nothing! This is tremendous!Got my heart going! More please. What wasthe fight about? I guess I'm nosey. Love them. Love him! Oh I'm in trouble! Thank you. Rest gently please. Dusty
| WritePassion chapter 1 . 7/4/2013
I recall someone saying that they couldn't write. After reading this, I say, BULL COOKIES! I loved it, Jane! I could imagine Sam standing in the hot sun sweating, and I could easily understand how he was feeling about the situation. You need to write more, girl! Welcome to the world of fan fiction writing. It's great to have you here!
| purdys pal chapter 1 . 7/4/2013
Very good, thank you for sharing your story. I hope you write some more.