Reviews for In the Light of the Moon |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Please finish your interesting story! |
![]() ![]() You shouldn't switch from pov to pov...It is not a good habit when writing. Instead, develop the characters and dialogue so that their views and feelings are made known to the reader rather than you having to label whose point of view it is. Otherwise, the writing comes off as bland and lazy. Also, there are several grammatical errors in punctuation issues. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I LOVE this fanfic. Poor Legolas ;-; I hope his father will help him again! I wonder how Thranduil will react when he hears about Legolas' fainting and how he is still self-harming. My poor elven babies |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'd love for this story to be finished! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is an amazing story! I love it! Cant wait to read more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this! I really hope I see more like it. Your an awesome writer and did great portraying the characters. I do have one question, where's Frodo? |
![]() ![]() ![]() aw so cute |
![]() ![]() More people should write in this genre |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw I hope there is more soon ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please continue to uptuade is very awesome and i can't wait the next chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice plot! I wish that your writer's block will fly away...and update the soonest. I wish that happy muse is with you 24/7. Do update! |
![]() ![]() please keep on writing. I just can't wait to find out what happens next. |
![]() ![]() Awwwwww... Cute! And poor Leggy! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice, like the angsty feeling in this story. Hope you will continue someday |
![]() ![]() ![]() The way thranduil approuched legolas is touching, you wrote a great story! I wish you wont abondne it and keep updating! Thanks for the great job! |