Reviews for In the Light of the Moon
Books4Life16 chapter 5 . 1/24/2019
Please finish your interesting story!
Guest chapter 1 . 12/24/2018
You shouldn't switch from pov to pov...It is not a good habit when writing. Instead, develop the characters and dialogue so that their views and feelings are made known to the reader rather than you having to label whose point of view it is. Otherwise, the writing comes off as bland and lazy. Also, there are several grammatical errors in punctuation issues.
I'm Just One Hell Of A Butler chapter 5 . 1/7/2018
I LOVE this fanfic. Poor Legolas ;-; I hope his father will help him again! I wonder how Thranduil will react when he hears about Legolas' fainting and how he is still self-harming. My poor elven babies
Whyamiobsessed chapter 5 . 9/17/2017
I'd love for this story to be finished!
Insane.Sonic.Fan chapter 5 . 7/15/2017
This is an amazing story! I love it! Cant wait to read more!
It's-Nothing-Just-A-Wolf chapter 1 . 7/6/2017
I love this! I really hope I see more like it. Your an awesome writer and did great portraying the characters. I do have one question, where's Frodo?
AndurilofTolkien chapter 5 . 3/16/2017
aw so cute
Guest chapter 3 . 8/6/2016
More people should write in this genre
Loki Joker Quinn Jr chapter 5 . 1/25/2016
Aw I hope there is more soon ;)
alexandraghinea65 chapter 5 . 11/20/2015
Please continue to uptuade is very awesome and i can't wait the next chapter
ravencarr chapter 5 . 3/31/2015
Nice plot!
I wish that your writer's block will fly away...and update the soonest.
I wish that happy muse is with you 24/7.
Do update!
Guest chapter 5 . 12/18/2014
please keep on writing. I just can't wait to find out what happens next.
Nameless chapter 5 . 11/17/2014
Awwwwww... Cute! And poor Leggy!
wenduo chapter 5 . 11/5/2014
Nice, like the angsty feeling in this story. Hope you will continue someday
H.TITAN chapter 5 . 8/23/2014
The way thranduil approuched legolas is touching, you wrote a great story!
I wish you wont abondne it and keep updating!
Thanks for the great job!
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