|Reviews for Birthday Present|
| TwilightCrystals chapter 1 . 7/11/2013
I love this story! I cried when bella got beaten by edward, but I loved the overall plot line :) xxx
| vickie l chapter 1 . 7/8/2013
i do love me a darkward and i especially love an irredeemable darkward who doesnt repent and does get away with it! hope you continue one day :)
| FlightlessBirdje chapter 1 . 7/8/2013
oh I like how your mind works...
keep them coming
| NixDucky chapter 1 . 7/8/2013
Lurve me some Darkward :-)
| robsjenn chapter 1 . 7/7/2013
yes, it's sick and wrong, and I only wish the fic was longer. ;) thanks for writing!
| Ellie Aluinn chapter 1 . 7/6/2013
Wow! I am really looking forward to updates . . . I truly am a sicko ;p
| forthewrittenword chapter 1 . 7/5/2013
Woah, that was...gripping. Can't this continue?
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/5/2013
Ummm. Yeah. That's so wrong. So, why do I want to explore this Carlisle and Edward more? Hummm. Kind of interested in the family dynamic here. Although I know it says complete, any chance? As always, love your writing, and eagerly awaiting another chapter of Before the Dawn.
| erika shoval chapter 1 . 7/5/2013
this is really good. Cant wait for the next chapter Fascinating start!
| southernpur-rica chapter 1 . 7/5/2013
Way to celebrate a b'day! Whoa that was intense and yet i couldn't stop reading. Is going to always let the others watch? Possibly participate with him? Do the others have blood slaves? Holy jaysus what happens next?!
| sujari6 chapter 1 . 7/5/2013
Very different Edward and Carlisle.
| Kianatwilightlover chapter 1 . 7/5/2013
Damn... That was tough but I still liked and enjoyed reading it... Update soon.
| robyn odei-ntiri chapter 1 . 7/5/2013
thank you for your new story...Edward & Carlisle are not the Cullens we know and love...ummmm ...I wonder how Bella will fair in this story..until you post again
| Keewho chapter 1 . 7/5/2013
I loved it give me more!
I like the pack coming in and saving her, and she begins to have feelings for Edward, or a connection or something!
| ivemetmyangel chapter 1 . 7/5/2013
ooops, forgat to log in, sorry, i was the one with the vampire comment