Reviews for Open
Catarina chapter 2 . 7/31/2013
Please do more. :)
Oppan chapter 2 . 7/6/2013
I love how you do the two point of views thing. Like you can see both characters thoughts
Jessica chapter 2 . 7/6/2013
No don't move it to one- shots they leave u with more questions than answers n beside ur writing is awesome :) I like the story it seems realistic
Guest chapter 1 . 7/6/2013
I like i good writer plz keep it up
Rawr Ashley Rae chapter 2 . 7/5/2013
Length doesn't always matter. It was good, in my opinion and I read like A LOT... But question, why do you change point of view but basically tell the whole chapter over?
Je m'appelle Maene chapter 2 . 7/5/2013
Rawr Ashley Rae chapter 1 . 7/5/2013
Please continue
UnderTheMonkey chapter 1 . 7/5/2013
UPDATE. Please!
SweettFace chapter 1 . 7/4/2013
yayayayayyay i like this. its kinda dark and very mysterious. And I LOVE anything dark and mysterious. Update soon pwease amazing first chapter
ThePenguinSledder chapter 1 . 7/4/2013
There are a couple typos, so I'd suggest another skim over your work, but it's interesting so far and I'm excited to see what happens next! :)
Brallie chapter 1 . 7/4/2013
A little short, but I liked it(: