Reviews for Sweet Temptations
Just me chapter 60 . 3/20
Finished perfectly love every bit of this story thanks for writing x
Just Me chapter 58 . 3/20
I love how all the way along you have worked in the SM version story lines and characters again in this chapter you haven't let us down I think I was holding my breath though
Echoes of a Bird of Prey chapter 6 . 3/19
I don't even know if you will see this review but i just found your story and I'm in love so far. The plot and characters are great and it's really fun to read. But for your future stories please be very careful about the slang you use If you're writing about American characters in America. So for example we say ass instead of arse. You've written diary a few times and I think you're referring to what we call a planner. Here a diary is what a girl(predominately) will write her thoughts in, it's not for business use. We spell it favorite instead if favourite. It doesn't make your story unreadably by any means but it is kinda distracting.
ladiblue03 chapter 60 . 3/16
nice story
NanStew chapter 60 . 3/13
Thanks for a great, wonderful story. Loved every bit of it. :-)
NanStew chapter 46 . 3/11
I am Team Rob. hehehehe
NanStew chapter 36 . 3/11
Paris, Rome and London sound great to me. Would love to see them. I have seen most of the US though, by car.
Just Me chapter 47 . 3/7
Great wedding love that verse I had it myself still really enjoying your story thanks for writing
NanStew chapter 9 . 3/7
Now he has to be slow... poor Edward. hahaha
NanStew chapter 4 . 3/7
Love this one and really chuckled at the ending... he was funny... Thanks
NanStew chapter 2 . 3/7
Love it when the bad guys get theirs right away! Now what next?
maphie chapter 60 . 3/6
Rough patch with the last chapter but I'm glad I visited his story.
maphie chapter 56 . 3/6
It must be in the water?
maphie chapter 55 . 3/6
Anthony breaks my heart a little bit.
maphie chapter 19 . 3/4
So she wasn't on birth control, I take it.
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