|Reviews for Bella? Is that you?|
| Len Stormcrow chapter 15 . 7/27
that was awesome
| Lupius chapter 10 . 10/15/2014
Everybody's complaining about being surprised by things that were clearly stated in the summary. If any of the haters had bothered to /read/ the summary, then none of them would have wasted their time reading something they weren't going to like. So F 'em. I don't come on this website to read epics of writing magnificence, I come here to find amusing ways to kill time. And I was certainly at the very least, amused by your story. I've spent more of my life reading way worse things than this, so kudos on making an amusing story.
| Judiis chapter 8 . 7/29/2014
Every five seconds there is an OK and somebody gets cut off(interrupted)
| sanekittens chapter 1 . 6/22/2014
Liking this already.
| milagglad chapter 27 . 6/21/2014
escribe otras como esta, estuvo buenisima
| Almighty Rainbow Dash chapter 14 . 5/26/2014
Imprints ask if something is OK too much.
| Guest chapter 3 . 3/17/2014
Argh the whole shemale shit ruined it, I'm normally open-minded, but this is competely and utterly unnatural as if you have both you would eventually die, lest you have the fake ones from surgeries - Fuck em, but seriously...NOT COOOL!
| poisondart18 chapter 27 . 2/18/2014
I enjoyed the story overall Thanks. Not sure why you felt the need to give the female shifters penises.
| Renee120 chapter 3 . 1/5/2014
Dude... No offense but you could have left THAT out and the story would be just as good. You may have just ruined this story for me...
| SixPerfections chapter 2 . 12/13/2013
Lol. Everyone turned gay, like Everyone. What's up with hating on the het couples? :D
| QuintessentialLola chapter 3 . 12/9/2013
I guess we now know what the fox says
| cethmistmyk chapter 14 . 11/12/2013
I like the idea of the story, but your writing style bothers me somehow. It doesn't explain enough, and you're too choppy with your dialogue. If I read it aloud it would work, but it's in my head so I can't always keep up.
That and while I know that it makes sense that the imprints don't "fall in love and live smut-ily ever after" it makes for a rather boring and slow story. And somehow changing all the pairings but C/E doesn't sit right with me. Maybe it's because you made everyone gay... (I looked for and am reading gay fan fiction, I like reading about gay pairings, but when suddenly EVERYONE is gay, it bothers me, especially when you're adding in so many new people)
Wow, I didn't realize I had so many issues with this fic. I love the premise, but I'm not a fan of the execution. I'll try to read it again one day, maybe it'll sit better then.
PS Don't take this the wrong way, I'm not trying to be mean, or flame you, I'm just telling you some things so maybe other fics can be better...
| Guest chapter 27 . 11/7/2013
Could of used more variety...
| Rayne Arianna Maranochi chapter 15 . 11/2/2013
Yay fuckward is dead!
| Rayne Arianna Maranochi chapter 14 . 11/2/2013
Kill Eddie. Castrate Jasper. Yeah sounds good. :)