Reviews for Fourth of July
Redtini chapter 1 . 7/4
Too sweet! Happy 4th!
2old4fanfic chapter 1 . 7/4
Cute. You don't see many 4th of July fics, definitely an underserved holiday!
dpennell007 chapter 1 . 7/4
Sweet, believable change from friendship to romance, with a lovely and enjoyable glimpse of their future. Happy 4th!
Guest chapter 1 . 12/1/2015
hey

really cute OS...
did you write a prequel or sequel for that ?
I think it would be a really good plot for a "big story" of 5 or 10 chapters!

bye
Lil
JennaRay chapter 1 . 11/19/2015
Why can't men be this sweet and loving in RL? Ugh. This was adorable.
Cullenboyz chapter 1 . 7/4/2014
*sigh* lovely
Perfect little o/s - thanks for sharing it and posting on FB!
Bled Dry chapter 1 . 7/4/2014
Oh this is so very beautiful!

I love the little details, they way her smile delights him, the absentminded touches. I'm a big fan of friendship-turning-to-love stories, and this, my dear, is gorgeous.
marigold123 chapter 1 . 8/3/2013
Got this from Katmom's community. I like the emotions and feelings you give these characters using few words. Enjoyed!
Killingmesoftl2 chapter 1 . 7/13/2013
This O/s was really cute! Loved it!
pimm cullen chapter 1 . 7/13/2013
:-)
adm01 chapter 1 . 7/9/2013
This is the sweetest thing! I very much enjoyed it. Thank you!
Guest chapter 1 . 7/7/2013
Sweet!
chartwilightmom chapter 1 . 7/9/2013
so sweet, lovely os
would love to see more, expand request please
thanks for sharing
akjamma chapter 1 . 7/7/2013
Great story!
Cosmogirl7481 chapter 1 . 7/5/2013
This was just the sweetest ever! I loved it. And OMG, Toil and Trouble! I die from the cuteness, okay? Thank you for writing this o/s inspired by the holiday.

My favorite: "And they kissed and kissed and kissed, until the only fireworks left were the ones between Edward and Bella."

Dead. I die from swoons.

xoxo,
cosmo
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