|Reviews for Ordinary|
| ChocoGummies chapter 54 . 3/10
Omg please continue! I love this story!
| team natsu and wendy 4 life chapter 54 . 3/2
i like it
some times i like the short chapters so dont worry about them but if you update faster i think it would make it up better
but i am also following gravity (i think) so dont worry
but this is a rreally good sweet story and i urge you to update faster!
| team natsu and wendy 4 life chapter 51 . 3/2
it is really good
i dont mind the short chapters but if you would update faster than or you could update a bit slower and make longer chapters
i think it is cute
| belladu57 chapter 54 . 2/13
| Guest chapter 54 . 2/5
I love it
I can't wait for more, I really can't! I love the chapters short and to the point style (and Gaara is well written as well).
Please keep it up!
| ever changes chapter 54 . 1/28
I do love this story and I'm so curious to how this will play out!
| rachel101448 chapter 54 . 1/24
I like this story very much! Miaka is a great character and she and Gaara are very cute together, even if they still both don't realize they like each other. As for the short chapters, I don't really mind them all too much if that's what you more comfortable writing. That is as long as you update quickly. :) Either way this story is great and I cant wait to read more of it! Keep up the great writing! XOXO
| Xhre chapter 54 . 1/17
maybe you can update more often you can't write longer.
I quite like it, but it seems to slow and it seems miaka ability little bit thick. quite a big problem as gaara is also thick.
| aishachase97 chapter 54 . 1/11
Awwwwwwwwwwww! so cute _
| Azuki Bean chapter 54 . 1/8
They are so cute!
| Azuki Bean chapter 53 . 1/8
You don't have to change a thing if you don't want to! I love how you post a handful at a time and I think it's great how you use this to help your writer's block and such. Keep up the great work!
| Azuki Bean chapter 52 . 1/8
Temari and Kankuro get it ;)
| CatsAreMyJoy chapter 54 . 1/7
Comment: it's is awesome.
Concern: I might die if you don't update soon.
| LazyKT chapter 53 . 1/6
I don't know, I like the short chapters. They get to the point and thus keep me interested. A lot of stories get boring with too many details and this one tells itself without dragging on.
| Rin Kirito chapter 54 . 1/6
This is a really good story. At first glance I thought I wasn't going to read all of it, but I'm glad I have read this far. Please update soon! :D