|Reviews for Afterimage|
| Angelkitty1 chapter 12 . 2/5
Oh man I read this a week ago and did not review, what is wrong with me?! I can't wait for Ryu and Nina to sneak out together :) Loved all the bustling in the kitchen too, everything feels so alive in this fic :) Also Nina's talk with her father. It was nice of him to at least ask her opinion of her suitors. Can't wait for more!
| Zero Tribal chapter 12 . 2/2
I don't think there are adequate words to describe how happy this entire story has made me.
| Angelkitty1 chapter 11 . 1/10
From the tension in the room with the Queen and Drypetis to that enchanting dance with Ryu and Nina, loved this in its entirety. Phillip's coldness towards Nina, whew! Locke's thoughts about his brother were intriguing as well :). So happy to see two updates so fast! Keep up the awesome work, girl!
Oh and Breath of Fire: the Winged Princess is the manga I was talking about, I'm not home so I had to do some googling hehe.
| Yuriski-1st chapter 11 . 1/10
It's nice to see, that despite their violent past Locke seems to care about his "brother"
| Guest chapter 11 . 1/10
Need more! Haha keep up the great work.
| Angelkitty1 chapter 10 . 1/8
Oooooo This is getting SO GOOD! Love the Deis/Myria part I'm so intrigued! And that last paragraph at the end where Ryu was thinking...beautiful. I know I've said this a few times but I really love your Ryu and Nina. I love everything about this :) I'm so bad at making reviews lol when there's so many good things about a story I'm at a loss for words, I'm just like I LOVE THIS and it's true!
As always, a huge fan of your writing! I really love how you take the extra step to write about very challenging relationships/situations. I'd love to have the time to go through your fictionpress account! Actually I'm working by myself tonight on a slow night...so maybe I will :)
| Guest chapter 9 . 1/3
I LOVE this! Please carry on
| Angelkitty1 chapter 9 . 1/3
Nina I still love this so very much. I hate that I haven't really had any time to write/read. Your Ryu/Nina moments are superb :) Love your characters, love your drama, can't wait to read more!
| Iloise chapter 9 . 12/27/2013
Really glad you decided to do another BOF fic! Princesses duty was always my fav I just love your writing! This fic seems a little more dark and twisted so I'm excited to see what is going to happen further into the plot :)
| colelle chapter 1 . 11/11/2013
this is a wonderful breath of fire fic and I hope to see more updates in the near future, im excited to see what is going to happen with both ryu and nina - I predict they will be confiding in each other soon enough but we definitely need more juicy plot details in terms of both of their storys before things get exciting!
Its refreshing to read new fics and see that people are still interested in breath of fire! much love for you and your fics miss Nina :)
| elfendrago chapter 8 . 10/12/2013
hey just found this story and i really like it i love the breath of fire series and am hoping this story isnt dead please add more chapters
| Yuriski-1st chapter 3 . 10/1/2013
So like the Ryu before him, he went Berserk-Kaiser?
| Nina.w chapter 6 . 9/26/2013
Great chapters, this fic is really interesting and I can't wait to see how you develop ryu and ninas relationship if there even will be one!
| Angelkitty1 chapter 6 . 9/22/2013
Let's see, my favorite character is Ryu so far (of course) :), I'm thinking that this is still so amazingly great, (loved the Nina scene) and my favorite juice is V8 splash strawberry/banana which I'm so pissed I can't find at my local grocery store anymore lol.
The sword fight was fine, you are getting better at action! Action is so pesky to write. I'm always so iffy whenever I do it, but it usually grows on me later.
I'm so glad I got downtime at work today, I was like I wonder if she updated...and bam!
Hmmm I might ask your permission to try and create some fan art for this! I'd have to read a bit more first to really get a feel for everyone but I think it would be fun!
Yay get that chapter up! I'll be waiting!
| Angelkitty1 chapter 5 . 9/16/2013
The race was fine! Great, even! LOVING this sibling drama. Locke's such a jerk!
And that's right, Ryu, I don't see why men and women have to do certain things and act a certain way either! :)
Yay more Christina but I still want to know what happened to her! The line: "Intimacy doesn't last forever," she said. Her eyes were bright, furious even, blazing under the aurora. "You need to grip it with both hands," she squeezed him tighter still, "otherwise, it's going to get away." was beautiful. You do have such a way with conversations :)
Sooooo you still have another chapter to put up right? Didn't you say you had about 3 drafted? :) Can't wait!