|Reviews for His Khio'ri|
| Guest chapter 10 . 1/14
I LOVE LOVE this story! The interaction of characters the feelings conveyed it is excellent. Please update soon!
| ankula chapter 10 . 11/23/2013
Please update! Please please :)
| ssooo chapter 10 . 10/25/2013
SHRIEKS OH MY GOD THIS IS SO GOOD
HOLY CRAP SKCHAICNAHXIAKBXOANDU
Dahlia is so unique omg she is, like, perfect for the ever stoic Spoke ;n;
UPDATE, PLEEEEEASE ;AAAA;
| StanziWood chapter 10 . 9/23/2013
Absolutely incredible story, you have such a gift! 3
| shalmarrose chapter 10 . 9/21/2013
next chapter please :)
| Guest chapter 10 . 9/16/2013
Yay! This was a good chapter. I can't wait to read more, if you update.
| boredom1013 chapter 10 . 9/15/2013
Your writing is absolutely amazing. I've never read something more emotion provoking. It's witty at times and fluid throughout the entire story. Really brings images to life.
| Aphrodite96 chapter 10 . 9/2/2013
WOW, I'm so glad you described what Spock sees in Dahlia, I see it. She's not only pretty to him, which I understand people to only think of her as a pretty face but someone who is also smart and understanding. Dahlia understands Spock's difference and the need for both his emotions and logic. That's very touching. I mean, even at times in the movie, Uhura wanted Spock to say how he felt which is a really human thing to do. This chapter was amazing and very descriptive and shows what a true, awesome writer you are. The symbolism at the end with the petals was pure genius. I really really really enjoyed this chapter and I can't wait for the next one. Amazing story as always and can't wait for more!
| Spocklover12 chapter 10 . 9/2/2013
great ending to the chapter more plz
| GraysonSteele chapter 10 . 9/1/2013
Once we get past Dahlia being her own unique self - lying in the rain in front of Uhura's apt. bldg.(really?), the rest of the chapter was very well done. Thank you for enlightening Nyota and me as to why Spock might be drawn to the cadet. You did a lovely job.
| JJ chapter 10 . 8/31/2013
I will not cry. I will not cry. I will ... :'(
| Teddy bear 007 chapter 10 . 8/31/2013
That was a deep chapter.
| mv err hj chapter 9 . 8/29/2013
| GraysonSteele chapter 9 . 8/28/2013
I just happened upon your story today. Dahlia is a hoot, but you've made her so flighty it is hard to believe that Spock would be drawn to her. While it is amusing to read her exchanges with Spock, it is my opinion that he would not tolerate most of them. Having said all that, I do hope you continue your story. I enjoyed reading these first nine chapters.
| Aphrodite96 chapter 9 . 8/26/2013
My freaking God! Great chapter but the ending was pretty sad. I swear, you just want to hurt your readers don't you? I really do like Dahlia, she's different and funny and has a quick wit about her. I understand what Spock wants, a serious relationship but Dahlia is young and from what I've read, has no experience in the relationship department. So that means she's not ready to completely jump into a serious relationship with Spock and agrees with him to remain friends. Great ending in this chapter btw and the quote. Love all your quotes. So yes, I can't wait for the next chapter. Please don't take long in updating. Some of us can't handle the wait!