|Reviews for This Could Kill Me|
| ABDCEFG chapter 1 . 5/24/2015
:'( this made me cry T-T NAAAAAAAAAT PLEASEEEE DON'T LEAVE ALFRED!
This fic is very touching. The way you describe Nat's feelings is simply beautiful... Although this made me cry a little, I'm very happy because I've found a very nice fanfic about these two. It's almost 2 years since you've wrote this... I'm going look at your profile... and I hope to find more interesting fanfics about AmeBel.
P.S: English is not my mother tongue... so excuse me if this review doesn't make sense or something like that :D
| badauthor808 chapter 1 . 11/19/2013
omg... them feels... ya know i was listening to 50/50 and Okaasan while reading this... huh...
| Wolfen Artist of KilGuin chapter 1 . 10/21/2013
This is really wonderful. Its very deep and the emotion put into it is astounding. I loved every bit of it.
| Sowelo chapter 1 . 10/2/2013
This was amazing. I love the emotions of AmeBel. (their my fave pairing of all time) There's not much stories with this pairing, and most I find is good but this one just clicks. Please write the epilogue soon, I want to read what happens!
| R. K. Iris chapter 1 . 7/25/2013
That was really nice...I really liked this fanfic. The ending was beautiful, and I loved how you played Natalya in this-good to see that there are others who don't see her as just some brother jumping female.
There was a bit of a problem with the grammar and those other things, but beyond that, this was quite sweet and poignant.
R. K. Iris.
| SA18LockDragon chapter 1 . 7/15/2013
OMG. You told me that you I needed more views? Girl, you deserve some! Waahh! I can't believe that you're only 17 yet you can write so majestically! I better be as good as you when I turn 17! haha. I llooooovvvvee it.
| almakazam chapter 1 . 7/6/2013
Wonderful and well-written. You have a way with words, and the details let me picture every scenario in my head. Although, on a personal note, you've really focused more on the foreplay than on intercourse, which isn't bad, but I wish there was more in the intercourse part. Foreplay parts were very good.
Good job on focusing on the emotions; after all, this isn't porn. ( ;D ) There was just this part wherein Natalya actually broke down; seemed a little too much feels and OOC, but nonetheless it was still amazing.
And how could I hate you for your ending? It was perfect. Sad, but it was logical. And again, perfect. It's bittersweet and lovely, ideally describing how America and Belarus would have been if ever AmeBel did happen in the fall of the Soviet Union.
Just noticed some grammar and spelling errors, but all in all, I'd rate this story 4.5/5