This fiction is great and I think was planned with a good story and another way from the original, it's very realistic and we can imagine another finals from a great game which has a good story.

you tell him uriko. Good stuff

well baki seems to have human emotions after all. good stuff.

Baki is such a jerk. Good work keep it up.

Uriko will win the next one she was just caught off guard i believe in our precious kitty. Good stuff

I don't like you baky stop hurting uriko. Good stuff

kenji is still being assholish hope uriko at least scratches him so it hurts good work.

oh god poor uriko sleeping with that bastard. Good stuff more reviews tommorrow

Hope Uriko gives kenji a swift kick in the nads. good stuff

kenji is an ahole here. Good stuff

I think the story is great, we can imagine another final to the BR II story as another destiny to the characters if something different would happen on the fight against ZLF in the real story. The first chapter is cool and very smart as we can see the ZLF as a strong organization which leader has prevail against strong zoanthropes and the story becomes more realistic, that makes the action more sensational. That's very good.

Kenji should stopt hurting the cute kitty. Good work.

Good work nice flash back keep it up.

Baky loses points here for hurting uriko bastard nice work man.

Uriko is so nice yet she wastes her breath with that bastard oh well. Nice work more tommorrow