Reviews for Bloody Roar II: A Killer's Seduction
Francisco Devilman Warrior chapter 5 . 11/14/2007
More kenji creepyness good work man keep it up.
Francisco Devilman Warrior chapter 4 . 11/14/2007
very good kenji is just a creepy as ever and still harming poor uriko
Francisco Devilman Warrior chapter 3 . 11/13/2007
excellent as always nice fight read more tommorrow for sure.
Francisco Devilman Warrior chapter 2 . 11/13/2007
Very good stuff and well described reading more now.
Francisco Devilman Warrior chapter 1 . 11/13/2007
nice beginning kenji and busuzima are creepy here but very good.
Kos4Evr chapter 1 . 11/12/2007
I have to admit, the story so far sets a dark mood, yet even the dark clouds cannot shut out the light of the sun. This walks the line of light and shadow, of yin and yang very carefully and does so with a lot of unanswered questions so as to keep you reading to find out the answers. I certainly hope that the future chapters can keep up the the mysterious and suggestive story telling that makes you curious on several levels. A suprisingly good read, though I expected good things from this author, I wasn't prepared for this.
Andrew Glasco chapter 40 . 11/11/2007
Yeesh...even though I helped out with this one, this still kind of gives me the creeps. The latter parts were obviously uncomfortable, but as always with me, I really enjoyed the introspection in the earlier parts of the chapter, and I thought as a whole it was all well-written.

Of course, it should be interesting to see how things move along from here. Even I'm still in the dark on some things, so keep writing when you get the time...y'know, with all your free time between work and school. () Talk to ya soon!
TamaKit123 chapter 40 . 11/7/2007
whoa...the DARKEST you can ever write, Tiger-sama...such good writing, tho the events made me want to cry...*sighs*

Another lovely chapter! And the last chapter was good as well btw.
Francisco Devilman Warrior chapter 40 . 11/6/2007
At this point kenji should just die and not quickly mind you he should suffer for everythinghe has done. he is a pig who renounces his humanity. Unlike Uriko who accepts it she knows and accept she is human just a little different. begs the question was kenji really born from a human woman or in one buzusimas tubes. I hope Urikos true powers surfaces(her uranus self)and makes him suffer.

I very much doubt love can bloom from this.

Nice work tiger very nice work and please make Kenji die a horrible death.
Indigo Siren chapter 40 . 11/6/2007
Uriko is an absolute fool. She had the chance to escape and she didn't. That's what you get for trying to be honest and nice. Horror! I didn't think he'd go THAT far, but he has been pushed over the edge - and really, he isn't a nice guy. Now I'm praying that she gets revenge on him - how love will come from this, I am not certain, but I would first like to see him suffer for that.

This chapter was indeed powerful! A lot of emotions mixed up there in the stirring pot.
Xenriel chapter 40 . 11/6/2007
Oh...geez... The next day is going to be hectic...
V Guyver chapter 40 . 11/5/2007
Well for starters, Kenji was a bit over dramatic with his speach, for a guy who's clearly losing it, he sure composes big sentances without loss of thought or composure, about the only logic flaw in this... well perhaps aside from Uriko being crazy enough to go back and kiss a guy who threatened to rape her and kidnapped her... Which I have to admit, this was an intense and dark Scenario, no I see why you hinted of it and wanted me to focus on that aspect of an RP but not sure if I could really of committed to that act anyways... Which shocked me as Kenji did indeed commit that horrible act on her regaurdless. It's accurate that is was a turn on for him, especialy with her struggling, my research does show that in their mentality, though some also show remorse afterwords... even for a sec, but usualy go back and repeat the offense. Frankly, right now my feelings towards this chapter are, that your delivered on what you promised... but I sure as hell want to kick Kenji's ass pretty damn hard. If he were a Mugen character, I'd download and force Slime on him for revenge. As disrturbing as the scene is, for some reason, the concept of Uriko squirming under the power of another man would appeal to so many. *Sigh* Well then good update, look foward to the next chapter, but now I'm a bit scared to find out what further acts he may install into her scarred mind. At least he didn't do one of those porn finishers from anime or actual porn where he decides to spray Uriko with his body fluids. Well keep up the good work Tiger. Oh and... Die AKS Kenji!
Musashi Sanada chapter 40 . 11/3/2007
... Aw man, I'm gonna have nightmares now! I can't believe Kenji just raped Uriko like that, and all she was trying to do was show him compassion! That's just an all new low for him! Time to go in there and kick some butt! *jumps into fan fic* HELLO BAKA! *beats the crap out of Bakuryu old school style and throws him into outer space to die* I win! XD Just kidding, I adore the original shy and innocent Kenji who knows honor quite well and deeply cares about Uriko in a shy way
Leebot chapter 39 . 10/14/2007
Hmm, Kenji sure is a conflicted soul, isn't he? He's so fiercely protective of Uriko from what the thugs wanted to do to her, and yet, only a few chapters ago, he tried to do the same thing himself. Though I guess, since she's his "property" now, he'd feel that only he has the right to do that, possibly.

You know, I have to say, it seems a bit odd for Kenji to be making those proclamations to Uriko during the battle. I'm not sure exactly why, but it just doesn't seem to fit. It seems a bit over the top, melodramatic maybe.

Yeah, he's really taken a turn for the evil in this chapter. His threat on Alice's life just adds to that. I'm not really sure what brought it out, either. Maybe some perspective into what's going on in his mind would help here. I guess the question I have for you about this is: Is Kenji asking that because you believe it's what the character would do in that situation, or because the plot demanded some device to keep Uriko from jumping on her chance to run away at the end?

Anyways, it was a nice read as usual. I hope when you're a bit less stressed, you might find an opportunity to read and review the newer chapters of my fic as well.
Indigo Siren chapter 39 . 10/7/2007
Its good to see you on the ball with this story! And you've especially dished out some amazing stuff - like here, an impressive array of action and emotions with everyone so uniquely believable for how they act and talk. And I really liked the ending part with Uriko's words actually hurting Kenji. Well, after everything, all the embraces and such, I would find it true to him, seeing as he is new to the whole love thing. I look forward to the next chapter you dish up for us! :-D
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