Reviews for Planetfall
Jamieson Zed chapter 1 . 3/23/2014
I enjoyed this, a nice scene with some light-hearted, "innocent" bickering before the more serious turn of their relationship. There were some typos, but overall well-written. I know you have it marked as complete, but if you were so inclined I think it would be neat to see this stage of their early interactions expanded upon. Thanks for sharing!
tahmtahm chapter 1 . 7/7/2013
Ahhh - Human and Vulcan interactions, especially between these two, are so fascinating. This story has the potential to continue - I hope you'll consider carrying it out further. Good job - thanks for writing!
Alelou chapter 1 . 7/7/2013
This is clearly hinting at some romantic possibilities (so it might annoy non TnTers). It's a good start, but it doesn't really stand alone as a story. Do you plan to go somewhere with it? Think of a plot that would allow some conflict and resolution - if not between them, then between them and some exterior force. Or both.
EmeraldReporter chapter 1 . 7/6/2013
Eww... A friendship story...

I want romance! This is the most dynamic, exhilarating heterosexual cou