I mean if Sasuke form a true friendship with Naruto he won't need to manipulated him because Naruto will gladly help him.

I have to say I had a blast reading this. This is an outstanding fic and i really hope you come back to finish it. Its 2024. Come back to us O Author.

Love the story and hope to see more.

Please keep going with this!

WOW JUST WOW THIS IS TRASH TRASH TRASH AND MORE TRASH FUCK YOUR FICK AND FUCK YOU.
GOOD TAHT THIS PEACE OF SHIT OF A FANFIC IS STOPT.

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Fuck this fick like i said befor.
He is a fucking beta bitch still a useless Idiot

well had a good start but then he behavid like a fucking pussy of a betza bitch with Tayuya so fuick this

One of the best Naruto fics I read, I was skeptical at first, but I guess I worried over nothing. The way you wrote Sasuke was great, as well as Danzo, and Konan. A lot of fanfics don't bother utilize Danzo's character as anything other than a 2dimensional bad guy, and sasuke as either canon or as an insufferable bully. Konan spy arc was probably my favorite part.

It started to get really intereating by the end, hope you pick it back up someday.

I don't think you need any help to make us, the readers, dislike Sakura, so making her that heartless was unnecessary.
Besides if you want Naruto to move on, it's better if he moves on in good terms instead of burning bridges with his teammates. You even made Kakashi look like an ass :[

why give him eye if he don't use themm

Please update man this story is so fuckin good and I want to read more

Okay, while I was excited to read this in the beginning to see where you went with it this is where I’ll have to drop it. You talked about being different in the limitations of how you develop Naruto and not just spamming shadow clone training which is understandable. Had Kurama point out his faults and have him trying to work towards progressing. Cool. But now you are leaving him on the team of a negligent Sensei who helped a traitor who doesn’t give a shit about him (you made him leave Naruto in favor of getting Sasuke back to the village even though Naruto was worse of injury wise), said traitor who tried to kill him, and the girl who called him a monster? After you had Tsunade threaten Sasuke with being breeding stock, you turn right around and do the illogical thing of having her let the dysfunctional team continue. And now you’re saying you’re adding Tayuya to the team after Kakashi blatantly disregarded an enemy who could have been taken in for questioning (he can do shadow clones as well in case you forgot which means he could have taken all 3 back with him instead of just Sasuke).

The first few chapters were enjoyable and glad to see a NaruTayu shipper.

You should return to this my friend!

It saddens me that this awesome work was never finished.

Hope you are doing well these days!

guy u re mad wat forgivness are u mad