|Reviews for Lose Yourself|
| Nrrrd-Grrrl-Meg chapter 2 . 8/9/2013
I like these two! I've seen pregnant tributes reaped (hell, I made one myself), but never one that volunteered! And Kai seems like the typical D1 guy, but I like him! Out of the two, I give the edge to Biance because of the baby.
| charliesunshine chapter 2 . 8/2/2013
that was really good, I feel sorry for Bianca and I like her more than Kai at them moment, I will submit another tribute if you tell me who's left
| ElectricSkeletons chapter 2 . 8/1/2013
Interesting idea! Can't wait to see where you take the story and tributes :)
| RueThisDay chapter 2 . 7/29/2013
I thought they were reaping 24 of them? How does that work?
I've met BecauseofKillianJones... And Bianca... And Killian (Or Kil')... And their unborn child.
They're in MY SYOT as well, if you want to know, and probably in more.
Just thought I'd let you know.
| LokiThisIsMadness chapter 2 . 7/29/2013
Great chapter! I think you made a good choice to write in third person, past tense. I loved the way you wrote Kai & Bianca, the other tributes better watch out because they're not going down without a fight. I think you did the romance part very well, mostly with Kil and Bianca but Kai and Milah were also great. Anyway, great work and update soon :D
| absentee.note chapter 2 . 7/28/2013
Awesome chapter! I do like your first person stories, but the third person is good too.
| DarkHorseBlueSky chapter 2 . 7/27/2013
I'll send in a few to fill up those spots if you want. Just tell me if you still need them tomorrow morning; it's rather late where I live and I can't send them in now.
| katsparkle13 chapter 2 . 7/27/2013
I think you made a good choice to write in third person, past tense. Though sometimes you will mess up tenses, the style does grow on you, I swear. I like reading it better because sometimes first person ends up sounding either to mechanical or too dramatic without much balance between. Third person is really good and you write well in it. There were hardly any grammar or spelling mistakes.
Nice characters, too. I really like Kai and your descriptions of him and Milah. I love the last line a lot and this one: Damn, she was pretty... but nowhere as beautiful as Milah. Very sweet!
Well done and I look forward to more from you!
| stick-at-nought shady chapter 2 . 7/27/2013
I really like your writing style for this! I'm going to have to try 3rd person past tense. Or at least dabble in it. It actually makes boring reapings better! You know, no whole "I AM A BADASS CAREER AND DO NOT KNOW HOW TO LOVE" thing
| TrackerJackson chapter 1 . 7/19/2013
I love it so far! I always love the stories that include a brief POV from a Gamemaker! I can't wait to see your next chapters and I hope my tribute makes it in!
| Nrrrd-Grrrl-Meg chapter 1 . 7/7/2013
Strange idea, but I think this one will work! Great job! I'm submitting now!