Reviews for Forgotten Soul
Guest chapter 39 . 6/11
Uhm the botfa has come and gone. Have you abandoned this story or you going to update.
GoldenPrince chapter 39 . 6/11
Wait... thats the end? ... oh thank god there's a sequel :D x
GoldenPrince chapter 37 . 6/11
Bilbo's shut your mouth line was actual perfection :D
GoldenPrince chapter 36 . 6/11
NO NOT BILLY! oh my god *dies* xxxx
Guest chapter 16 . 6/9
Nice reference to the Neverending Story in Chapter 16 with the horse.
GoldenPrince chapter 10 . 6/7
Why do I keep crying at this story oh my god :'D x
cleanh2ogal57 chapter 34 . 4/26
I am enjoying your story but am
having a difficult time with your incorrect English. Your tenses are wrong, you use 'ly' where it doesn't belong, some sentences are awkwardly structured. I am willing to help you with your writing style, if you wish.
Sparkle girl 71 chapter 39 . 1/28
This is a wonderfully captivating tale, but now we need to know what happens to them all :). Here's hoping for part 2! Please keep going with this, you have made them come alive most beautifully :)
belladu57 chapter 39 . 11/28/2014
Very good
crazykenz chapter 39 . 11/20/2014
"she is dying"
hope part 2 comes out soon!

from a devastated reader
crazykenz chapter 16 . 11/20/2014
you killed the pony! O.O :'(
DrWholock chapter 39 . 10/6/2014
This is not okay. This was a great story and now the main character is dying. Whyyyyyyyy would you do this?
AnneDance1711 chapter 39 . 7/29/2014
Mahal I love this story!
Rys-n-ollie mom chapter 39 . 6/29/2014
Please Please Please continue this story...
The Dark Insomniac chapter 39 . 6/10/2014
Say what?! Not a cool cliffy my friend!
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