|Reviews for Forgotten Soul|
| Guest chapter 39 . 6/11
Uhm the botfa has come and gone. Have you abandoned this story or you going to update.
| GoldenPrince chapter 39 . 6/11
Wait... thats the end? ... oh thank god there's a sequel :D x
| GoldenPrince chapter 37 . 6/11
Bilbo's shut your mouth line was actual perfection :D
| GoldenPrince chapter 36 . 6/11
NO NOT BILLY! oh my god *dies* xxxx
| Guest chapter 16 . 6/9
Nice reference to the Neverending Story in Chapter 16 with the horse.
| GoldenPrince chapter 10 . 6/7
Why do I keep crying at this story oh my god :'D x
| cleanh2ogal57 chapter 34 . 4/26
I am enjoying your story but am
having a difficult time with your incorrect English. Your tenses are wrong, you use 'ly' where it doesn't belong, some sentences are awkwardly structured. I am willing to help you with your writing style, if you wish.
| Sparkle girl 71 chapter 39 . 1/28
This is a wonderfully captivating tale, but now we need to know what happens to them all :). Here's hoping for part 2! Please keep going with this, you have made them come alive most beautifully :)
| belladu57 chapter 39 . 11/28/2014
| crazykenz chapter 39 . 11/20/2014
"she is dying"
WHY WOULD YOU DO THAT?!
hope part 2 comes out soon!
from a devastated reader
| crazykenz chapter 16 . 11/20/2014
you killed the pony! O.O :'(
| DrWholock chapter 39 . 10/6/2014
This is not okay. This was a great story and now the main character is dying. Whyyyyyyyy would you do this?
| AnneDance1711 chapter 39 . 7/29/2014
Mahal I love this story!
| Rys-n-ollie mom chapter 39 . 6/29/2014
Please Please Please continue this story...
| The Dark Insomniac chapter 39 . 6/10/2014
Say what?! Not a cool cliffy my friend!