Reviews for Forgotten Soul
cleanh2ogal57 chapter 34 . 4/26
I am enjoying your story but am
having a difficult time with your incorrect English. Your tenses are wrong, you use 'ly' where it doesn't belong, some sentences are awkwardly structured. I am willing to help you with your writing style, if you wish.
Sparkle girl 71 chapter 39 . 1/28
This is a wonderfully captivating tale, but now we need to know what happens to them all :). Here's hoping for part 2! Please keep going with this, you have made them come alive most beautifully :)
belladu57 chapter 39 . 11/28/2014
Very good
crazykenz chapter 39 . 11/20/2014
"she is dying"
...
WHY WOULD YOU DO THAT?!
hope part 2 comes out soon!

from a devastated reader
crazykenz chapter 16 . 11/20/2014
you killed the pony! O.O :'(
DrWholock chapter 39 . 10/6/2014
This is not okay. This was a great story and now the main character is dying. Whyyyyyyyy would you do this?
AnneDance1711 chapter 39 . 7/29/2014
Mahal I love this story!
Rys-n-ollie mom chapter 39 . 6/29/2014
Please Please Please continue this story...
The Dark Insomniac chapter 39 . 6/10/2014
Say what?! Not a cool cliffy my friend!
ellesmer.joe3 chapter 9 . 6/2/2014
HE'S IN DENIAL. I LOVE IT HAHAHAHAH
GoodGirlHeather chapter 39 . 5/29/2014
I just spend a rainy afternoon reading this fantastic story. Very well woven! Can't wait for the last part!
Angel JJK chapter 39 . 5/29/2014
What a cliffy... Hope it ends well for Lili and Thorin
Caladhiel999 chapter 39 . 5/27/2014
I BEG YOUR PARDON?! SHE CANNOT DIE!
Luinwen-2013 chapter 39 . 5/27/2014
Whaaaaat?
And you'll make us wait all way long until December?
You better hire a good couple of bodyguards!
Just joking, love your story and will be patiently waiting (ok, not *that* patiently) for the remaining of it.
Jo chapter 39 . 5/27/2014
Okay cool so pumped for the next part and for the next movie
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