Reviews for Fighting Without a Cause (discontinued)
CarolWim chapter 35 . 3/24
Your problem is too much rambling, switching from the one to the other and don't finish parts of your plots, sib plots, sub sub sub etc plots. Now you're nowhere and give up. Pity.
CarolWim chapter 28 . 3/24
You like to ramble, not?
stylo1 chapter 3 . 3/6
those vows alone would get harry killed, in war you need to kill thus breaking the law and give dumbels free rein. im war innocents get killed period by both sides again breaking the vow
swilliamsxn chapter 35 . 2/11
Please rewrite I love the story.
kyoshi711 chapter 23 . 1/27
Harry is a real dick. He puts his values from his home world on them. Then he takes over the Potter family and seizes their money. He's a crook at best and a jerk besides.
shinigaminoyoru chapter 1 . 1/3
entertaining read for what it was. wish it was finished or at least the last arc. but all y'all hateful reviewers are way to judgemental for fan fiction. go troll 4chan and leave constructive criticism here you stupid c*#ts
Guest chapter 35 . 12/16/2017
idiots who are too stupid to finish
noxenrom chapter 2 . 11/24/2017
Cheesy story is edgy af.
Rawrking chapter 7 . 11/19/2017
much trash
brennan.mholmich chapter 8 . 11/11/2017
So you put him in Hufflepuff because no one asked him to be put in there? If that's not another sign of awful story telling, I don't know what is.
brennan.mholmich chapter 6 . 11/11/2017
The dialogue continues to stay as bad as it was in the first chapter. Really, I'm only writing these out so people don't waste their time.
brennan.mholmich chapter 5 . 11/11/2017
He can't "have a mediocre of skill or just be arrogant" it's a 'modicum'
brennan.mholmich chapter 2 . 11/11/2017
I can see why you gave up on this story, it's pretty bad.
brennan.mholmich chapter 1 . 11/11/2017
You should remove or relist this as non-complete, you've abandon the story, it's not done. Take it off the complete listings, so people who like to read when someone actually finishes a story on this site can.
Mana's Cinder chapter 35 . 9/28/2017
Don't label this story as complete. It is not complete. It is abandoned. There is a vast difference. People who search using the "Complete" tag don't want to see a story that isn't finished. It's just lying. Mislabeling at best.
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