Reviews for Spider-man: Forever
williamhaysjr chapter 6 . 4/10
you're right, extrememly corney and you could have added a few extra chapters about them returning home
spiritedghost chapter 6 . 1/3/2016
A bit weak, but I have no doubt, the complexity of this storyline had to be mentally over taxing. Although to be fair you did a Marvellous job. No pun intended. Now I am on to another of your stories.
spiritedghost chapter 3 . 1/3/2016
At a guess, and keep in mind knowing your writing style I am probably wrong, but it's it the musical, Mrs Webb? Also be kind I haven't picked up a comic in over 35 Years. Yep I am in my low 60's. So be nice. (Winks)
spiritedghost chapter 2 . 1/3/2016
Loving it more and more. I bow to your majestic prows of creativity. (grins and says innocently or smugly, you pick, "I own a thesaurus and. Know how to use it, don't you?"). Now kindly go away I am trying to read and you are hindering my efforts. (Sticks out my tongue and crosses my eyes muttering under my breath, "Bloody, marvelous, story.") Hey before I go, because you make this just to easy, did you notice how I snuck in your word for Mz. Marvel a.k.a. MARVELOUS? (Grins and bolts for the door tripping over the ethereal threshold and offering one last, "Ta, for now
spiritedghost chapter 1 . 1/3/2016
I love it, although it is a bit confusing. Still "Brilliant!" You do get the reference, yes?
diagonalpumpkin chapter 6 . 10/5/2015
Wow. All that interdimensional stuff became really confusing, but it was totally worth it all together. It was a lot of ups and downs (through all the stories) and I really enjoyed all of it. Thank you for all the hard work in writing all of this, and pulling it all together in a really good way. I was not expecting the final villain, but I definitely get it and think it was a wonderful idea and plot. I would love to see more Peter/Kara fics if you are offering :D. Again, thank you so much for all of your writing (this story, the ones that led to it, and all of your stories). I've really been enjoying it. Keep up the amazing work.
Nick chapter 6 . 9/23/2015
Dude your not going to do a follow-up like Spiderman destroys captain marvel pornographic pics because I for one do not want it to end like that
Plasma57 chapter 6 . 6/7/2015
What happened to the Marvel Crossroads May-Anne? Excellent story, please update soon.
Guest chapter 6 . 11/3/2014
A whole new Peter/kara
Glogbag chapter 6 . 2/23/2014
I think you shoulda do the new world thing and if you do can you make a Peter Parker/Spider-Man That has Miles Morales suit, but venomy(red is white,blue is black) with a trench-coat and make him the director of shield (don't have to just think it would be cool)
Clouffie1986 chapter 6 . 1/5/2014
In my opinion, I would suggest a re-write of Spider Man: New World
REDxYELLOW chapter 1 . 1/1/2014
This story is interesting. I'll admit that I had to read it a couple of times. I wanna see how you'll do this story.
A-BOMBLIKEABOSS chapter 6 . 9/24/2013
Write a new Spidey a new world fic
Sensational Spider-Fan chapter 6 . 9/23/2013
I see where your coming from. This story overall is okay the end of the chapter's really rushed though. It could use a 1 to 1.5 K word epilogue just to show where the different Spider-Men are each now standing with there respective girls.
vampireharry the 2 chapter 6 . 9/23/2013
I kinda like the ending! Good job!
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