Reviews for A Legacy in Progress
Sandy-wmd chapter 3 . 8/4/2013
I haven't noticed a problem with tenses or grammar, so anything you might have left isn't enough to detract from the story. I'm still trying to figure out NGCH, all I came up with so far is "Not Gonna Cure Hunger," which would imply the crops won't work. Please update soon?
realtanna chapter 3 . 8/2/2013
love tony and bruce's banter,
i'll never look at a rainbow the same way again though!
Vul chapter 1 . 7/30/2013
May I ask why you think Thor/Jane is "not exactly healthy" in the MCU? I mean, it's a bit too fast and they don't have much in common (neither do Thor and Darcy, though...) and that makes it a bit ridiculous and unbelievable, but not exactly "unhealthy". Personally, I'm pretty neutral to the pairing so I'm really just wondering what aspect you see that I don't.
Violentshadow chapter 1 . 7/29/2013
good chapter.
candyfloss123 chapter 3 . 7/29/2013
please hurry and uplode the next chapter i want to find out weather or not it works x
Lady Laran chapter 1 . 7/7/2013
You could always do a triad with Thor, Bruce, and Tony. Might be interesting. I love science boyfriends. So cool!