|Reviews for About the cold within and the fire yet consume us|
| xxfluffyxx123 chapter 1 . 1/17
| luneara eclipse chapter 1 . 12/20/2013
This is really good! I love your plot line so far! Really great work!
| unrequited honor chapter 1 . 8/9/2013
please continue. im anxious
| Ashamalee chapter 1 . 7/29/2013
Awesome so far!
| Elliichen chapter 1 . 7/24/2013
I like it. Please update soon :)
| lol chapter 1 . 7/14/2013
i was a bit confused with some of the dialogue, but steady start
| Northlane chapter 1 . 7/11/2013
Fucking absolutely love it. The wording was a bit stilted though. Just try to calm down a little bit and be confident in your writing. I think you've got a lot of potential with this story, and also for improvement.. lemme know if you would like a proofreader!
| jezzie24 chapter 1 . 7/9/2013
Love it! Keep going! : )
| obsidion chapter 1 . 7/8/2013
I like the premise can you keep almost or all chapters at this length. good story.
| translucent chapter 1 . 7/8/2013
That was a great first chapter please continue, im very interested in this.
| Khrat9 chapter 1 . 7/9/2013
Great start ! Can't wait for the next chapter !
| heros bane chapter 1 . 7/8/2013
pretty good, please update soon
| The Unfamiliar chapter 1 . 7/8/2013
Hope you update soon :)