Reviews for In My Shoes
PastOneonta chapter 1 . 10/22/2015
This was great, clever, fun, sweet, and the happy ending. I loved their conversation as they walked, what an opportunity to understand one another better. David as protective Dad was perfect. The heat between them was just amazing, with Ruby realizing exactly that at the end. Really like this short story.
TashaRose chapter 1 . 12/28/2013
Nice one. {Smiles}
Revenessa chapter 1 . 11/25/2013
Lovely drabble!
wailsofangels chapter 1 . 7/15/2013
JizelleMariano chapter 1 . 7/11/2013
I loved it! It was really funny, especially the part where Hook said that Milah and Emma would've been great friends... lol
Zoraya Windwalker chapter 1 . 7/9/2013
So, this is kinda random... but the moment she thought about killing him with a paperclip kinda reminded me of Ziva (NCIS).
Yeah I know, my brain works in strange ways o.O...
Anyway, just wanted to say that I really enjoyed this.
childlikeheroes chapter 1 . 7/8/2013
This story was fantastic to read, and I love the dynamic between Hook and Emma, especially here. One question though, is this set before or after Neverland? Or does the timing not matter?
lieutenantswan chapter 1 . 7/8/2013
THIS IS SO ADORABLE I LOVE IT. I was pretty much flailing the entire time I was reading this omg. UGH and the little convo snippets. LOVED IT.
""It can happen the other way around as well, can't it? From friends to lovers?"
He finally looks at her. "Are we friends, Emma?"
"I'd like to think so.""
Great fic, I really enjoyed reading it, and the little details made me extremely happy! :)
CupCakeConundrum chapter 1 . 7/8/2013
Naw that was really cute. I love how you wrote it, with the little segments of conversations they had, showing how they open up to each other. And then that, at the end, they aren't really together yet but they most certainly are heading in that direction. And Ruby at the end :) x x
CaptainSwan109 chapter 1 . 7/8/2013
LOVE LOVE Love! A great one shot, simple but adorable and perfect!
PeaceHeather chapter 1 . 7/8/2013
AwwwwWW! That was so CUTE! It's such a common trope in fic, but when it's done well it's just so darn much fun. Which.. you know... is why it's such a common trope. And in this case, very well done indeed. Go you!
AMiserableLove chapter 1 . 7/8/2013
I absolutely adored this! Very well written and just an all around wonderful read! Thank you for posting! :)
lovingcaptainswan chapter 1 . 7/8/2013
Wow, this was amazing! I love that this is humorous, but at the same time, it was very well thought out. All the little snippets of conversation you wrote during their walk were just wonderful, the perfect mix of teasing and vulnerability. Great job, I really enjoyed this. :D
Ni Castle chapter 1 . 7/8/2013