|Reviews for Invisible People|
| animelovernewbie chapter 17 . 4/13
Awesome story! :) I love how you kept the plot of How to Train Your Dragon only you replaced dragons with the guardians and spirits. Made for an entertaining read. :)
| YourGreatestDream chapter 17 . 3/13
Wait, wait wait. Gobber helped fix the staff this time, so does that mean he has to hold onto the staff with Jack and Hiccup in order for it to work?
| YourGreatestDream chapter 11 . 3/13
The point where Hack and Hiccup fly through the ocean cliffs, the past tense turned into a messy present tense. Also, during the second to final match with just Astrid and Hiccup, someone says at the end: "Oh you've done it! You get to kill the dragon!" Instead of spirit.
There's a lot of grammar mistakes, but I like where this is going so far.
| Serenity'sfire98 chapter 17 . 1/25
Okay, that was completely awesome and you are a genius for coming up with that. Just saying.
| Darkflower123 chapter 17 . 1/20
How does this not have more reviews! It's amazing!
| Ilmazzobro chapter 17 . 12/21/2013
Aaaaaawwwwwwww tooo cuuute
| The Glittering Pencils chapter 17 . 12/6/2013
Do you have any bloody idea how hard it is to find a good Hiccup/Jack story?! I've been reading them all day, and this one is definitely my favorite! Thanks for writing this; it made my day:)
Also, this plot is just... So clever!
| yaoifan23 chapter 17 . 9/15/2013
awww i love it!
| Fangirl4ver chapter 17 . 8/18/2013
This was an amazing story:) I lovedddddd it! You need to write more for this couple:) I loved the ideas and how you followed through:) I love how they became so close;) it was adorable like I was crying and screaming joy:) I loved the flying and god jack is just so sexy and hiccup is just adorable:) great job pleaseeee write more:)
-forever keep writing
| Guest chapter 17 . 8/15/2013
This... was the most beautiful fanfic I have read in quite a long time... congrats, you are an amazingly spectacular person with an incredible talent.
| Paoshirou Hozomi chapter 6 . 8/2/2013
wow! Sweet! As we say in the Philipines "KILIG to the MAX!"
| Paoshirou Hozomi chapter 1 . 8/2/2013
Loved the twists! I wonder if Pitch is here... That would be interesting!
| XiaoWing chapter 1 . 8/2/2013
Really love it
Please update soon :)
| loyalwolf21 chapter 17 . 7/30/2013
this was really cool to read, i couldn't help but smile all through it. well done i really enjoyed it hope to see more stories hopefully with more Hjack thanks for writing!
| JMarieAllenPoe chapter 17 . 7/29/2013
Ermahgerd I love this! This fic was soo great! :D could u do a ROTG version now? :D