|Reviews for Dear Fanfiction|
| GMW chapter 23 . 12/14/2013
Try out Harvest King/Ignis, please?
| Icefeather chapter 23 . 11/24/2013
Awesome xD. Yeah, I like Chase too, but I like Luke better :P. Happy Thanksgiving!
| Tiger Lily of the rain chapter 17 . 11/24/2013
Right, "Loving". HA HA HA. _
(I'm just gonna stop reviewing and read now...)
| Tiger Lily of the rain chapter 14 . 11/24/2013
My reaction WHATWHATWHATWHATWHATHAHAHAHAHAHWHAT
| Tiger Lily of the rain chapter 11 . 11/24/2013
I LOVE MARY! I WOULD MARRY MARY IN MORE FRIENDS OF MINERAL TOWN IF I COULD.
(You're author notes are rib-crushingly hilarious, and the writing is amazing)
| Tiger Lily of the rain chapter 10 . 11/24/2013
I actually laughed more at the AN then the story, I hope that doesn't make me a horrible person.
| Tiger Lily of the rain chapter 9 . 11/24/2013
Dude, no, Wizard isn't a vampire, no. Like what, nope.
(Still hooked on these awesome scribblings)
| Tiger Lily of the rain chapter 7 . 11/24/2013
DUDE THE HAT. THE HAT IS STRONG IN THIS CHAPTER X'D
| Tiger Lily of the rain chapter 6 . 11/24/2013
Okay Marlin, let's overlook the fact that you're a wanna-be Elvis. (Dude I think I'm Marlin's girl counterpart holy shit, you know like without the Elvis part, I pretty much genuinely hate everything holy shit I'm Marlin) O_O
| Tiger Lily of the rain chapter 5 . 11/24/2013
That last line cracked me up, Oh Cheryl! I think some people hate her because of her over-protectiveness of Ash but I think it's pretty dang adorable. And the whole part that's like " . .' Ah damn, I need new lungs from laughing.
| Tiger Lily of the rain chapter 4 . 11/24/2013
I love all the doctors! Trent, Alex, Hiro, Ayame, Jin...*sigh* Oh, and Elli! Never forget Elli.
(I'm getting hooked)
| Tiger Lily of the rain chapter 3 . 11/24/2013
We can't help it Molls, you're like a big marshmallow of lurvee. (Chase ! *Squeel*
| Tiger Lily of the rain chapter 2 . 11/24/2013
Well this is some addictive writing, huhuhu, prepare to get bombarded by reviews because I love this!
| imagine.believe chapter 23 . 11/24/2013
I totally love this series! Hahahaha
can I suggest Neil, Allen and Rod? I guess they have a lot to clarify. like... a lot. :)
| Peach chapter 22 . 11/5/2013
I haven't been here in a while, but I have to say... I freaking love this!
You brought up a lot of good points in there. Also, there is one thing that I'm glad you keep bringing up. These people have work too. It isn't all about love. They have work to do.
Plus, I do understand why you are having some characters, like Vaughn and Witch Princess, complain about the angsty past some authors make. It does tend to get out of control.
This is why, when I was on this site, I would tell others to include the farm work more, if they were focusing on the farmer. After all, the farmer has more work he or she could be doing instead of worrying about love 24/7. And as you pointed out from the beginning, none of them came searching for love.
I have two little nitpicks, but they are minor really considering what this is about. First of all there is no s in Witchkin. I do understand the mistake, it is on Fogu. But even the game says Witchkin, not Witchkins.
And number two is with the Doctor, whom we got to know later with the name Trent. In the GBA game, he was given a name, Tim. And even then, if anyone was to be blamed for his lack of name originally, I don't think it would be Natsume, since all Natsume does is localize. The blame should be shifted on Marvelous, since they are the ones who make the games, not Natsume. Don't worry though, as I see this misconception a lot, when it comes to Natsume I mean, so I understand completely how you made this mistake.
However, I think you wrote this very well, and I'm sure the rest of your chapters will be just as insightful! So keep up the good work!
I think a chapter on Regis should be in order. Out of anyone who gets called a vampire, he gets called that way too much I think. Don't people realize that Regis was only playing along with the joke in the Rumors event?