Reviews for A Work of Art
kouga's older woman chapter 33 . 5/20
Poor Bella! Paul needs to get his shit together!
cloudshadow22 chapter 33 . 5/18
Terrific chapter - I happen to love Jake, so I am glad that your version has matured a bit and is able to treat Bella as the friend that she needs right now. I am surprised that the hospital hasn't identified the drug that was in Paul's system; hopefully it does show up. I really like how your characters keep meeting and connecting in so many ways.
litanolastar chapter 33 . 5/18
nice chapter,
TiffaniW chapter 33 . 5/18
This thing is turning into one epic f-up after another. I don't hate Jacob. He just seems broken. But they are a disaster waiting to happen. I still hate Paul. I can at least understand Jake's assholery. Paul's in a whole other class of jackass.
linntherese chapter 33 . 5/18
I think it's worng of Bella to go to Jacob when hurting over Paul. It's even worse when thinking about how Paul feels about him, when she knows Paul was right. It's like she is leading Jacob on (he more or less confirmed that he had feelings for her earlier). It's a shitty thing to do, even if she tries to justify it by telling herself she does it to be friends with him. Also, does she not have any respect for herself? Jacob has treated her like shit for years, and she forgives him just like that?

I think it was wrong of Paul not to tell the truth, but I think it was eaqually Bella's fault for believing him so easily. If she really love him shouldn't she have seen that Paul was lying, or that something wasn't quite right? At the very least take into consideration that he is in fact in a hospital (when he doesn't usaully drink that much). She doesn't see anything weird about that?

I don't like to read Bella/Jacob, but I'm not going to stop reading just because it seems to be going that way. It's your story and you have every right to right it your way. I do however really hope it won't last long.
Not.Yet.A.Writer chapter 32 . 5/5
Brilliant :0 can't get enough of it :) xxx
kouga's older woman chapter 32 . 4/30
He threw at Jacob!
jul5857 chapter 32 . 4/27
No one better hate you sweetie! That was a tough chapter to read so I'm sure it was even harder to write...especially if you've gone thru any of that yourself.
I love your writing & can't wait to read more!
Hugs!
cloudshadow22 chapter 32 . 4/26
I love Jake also, and he has been just the friend that Bella needs at the moment. Sorry that Paul can't see whose arms she is crying into at the moment. Glad that Paul threw Leah out on her ass. Looking forward to those next chapters.
cloudshadow22 chapter 31 . 4/26
This chapter is so sad, and Paul is such an ass. I do like that Jake has learned to be a friend to a female. I suspect that he will miss Daphne more than he thinks.
litanolastar chapter 32 . 4/26
Nice chapter
blueguju chapter 32 . 4/26
I get that there's something mentally wrong with Jacob but I feel like with the therapy that he's going through with Quil, that he should know better. That's coming from someone who's gone through similar things and been through therapy herself. I still have this niggling feeling that he's trouble.

Is the doctor going to tell Paul that he was drugged? That's what I'm waiting for, really.

Also, Bella should've known better even in her state of depression. I know you had her go to Jacob's place to move the story along but she's smart, I don't see that happening even in her distressed state.
Buttonsxxx chapter 32 . 4/26
Stupid stupid Leah. Ugh so want to punch her. Lol at least your writing provokes emotions .
linntherese chapter 31 . 4/17
I hope Bella learns the truth from overhearing a conversation; for exemple between Paul and someone else, or some of their friends talking among themselves. Or better yet, hearing someone talk about Leah being in jail for what she did to Paul. Wishful thinking?
I think she would have a hard time believing Paul if he wants to tell the truth now, since he lied before and Bella thinks what he said is the truth.

I really hope you don't have Bella get together with Jacob, because that would really cheapen what is between her and Paul. And I really don't want to read a Bella/Jacob story, even if it's just for a little while :p
kouga's older woman chapter 31 . 4/16
Paul is really being stupid!
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