Reviews for Sankofa
Docile Boy chapter 1 . 7/9/2013
This was extremely enjoyable. You covered quite a long time with (what I think) is a wonderful economy of words, but nothing felt rushed. Miranda's revelation and the desperate intimacy at the end was spot on, and I can't help but have happy thoughts regarding their continuing relationship. Thank you so much for sharing.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/9/2013
That was fun
Anonymous chapter 1 . 7/9/2013
So wonderfu, what a great idea and storyl! Thanks so much! And please do follow up!
emeraldorchids chapter 1 . 7/9/2013
So hot. Loved this story-beautifully written. Would have loved to read the article Andy wrote ;)
ElfJet chapter 1 . 7/9/2013
Oh that was lovely :D Thank you
niktiera chapter 1 . 7/9/2013
Loved it and would love it if you continued...thanks for you and July
chariot82 chapter 1 . 7/9/2013
Favorite line (or one of them) "But if I'm going to ruin it, I'll do it with all the flair I can." Flair indeed, Miranda.
That kind of unresolved I can deal with, but if you'd like to do a follow-up who am I to protest? :o)
Trudy Rulez chapter 1 . 7/9/2013
Oh how I love the all ends well sexscene. I loved this story more. Great how Andy fell into Miranda's orbit and fetched coffee like a pro. I love your Mirandy interaction and can only hope for more writing Mirandy going out of control. Thank you so much for writing and sharing. I think you have great talent.
Somewhere there was a scene in a Japanese restaurant that reminded me of the movie "i've heard the Mermaids singing" by Patricia Rozema. Could have been hilarious to let Miranda comment on the sea-urchin digestion.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/9/2013 I love how you kept Miranda and Andy true to character. Luscious.
Awayfan chapter 1 . 7/9/2013
Oh wow this is one of the best short stories I have read in a long time. It would be great if there was a follow up story.
therealcoshieville chapter 1 . 7/9/2013
I like this - a lot!
jh728 chapter 1 . 7/9/2013
Outstanding. I loved the whole thing. And your title was perfect (once you explained).
I will definitely be reading this again and again.
Thanks for the read.
martha-brazilis chapter 1 . 7/9/2013
Thank you for this story. Original plot line and Mirandy inside and out. Thanks again and regards from Brazil!
Kthac chapter 1 . 7/9/2013
Absolutely brilliant! Loved the slow build and the characterisation of both Andy and Miranda. Hoping for a happy continuation of equal length without much angst. Long, well-written stories are my all-time favourite thing - better even than cookies. Thanks for all your hard work.
ea-phoenix chapter 1 . 7/9/2013
Wow. Just enough angst and sexual tension to keep me on edge without becoming annoying. That was great. The ending gave enough that I can assume what happens next (having read nearly every Mirandy story out there) and it's clear that they're going to start up a lasting relationship, but I'm NEVER opposed to a good follow-up, if you so choose. It's something I would definitely read. Again, good job!
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