| Reviews for Sankofa |
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   Docile Boy chapter 1 . 7/9/2013 This was extremely enjoyable. You covered quite a long time with (what I think) is a wonderful economy of words, but nothing felt rushed. Miranda's revelation and the desperate intimacy at the end was spot on, and I can't help but have happy thoughts regarding their continuing relationship. Thank you so much for sharing. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/9/2013 That was fun |
| Anonymous chapter 1 . 7/9/2013 So wonderfu, what a great idea and storyl! Thanks so much! And please do follow up! |
| emeraldorchids chapter 1 . 7/9/2013 So hot. Loved this story-beautifully written. Would have loved to read the article Andy wrote ;) |
| ElfJet chapter 1 . 7/9/2013 Oh that was lovely :D Thank you |
| niktiera chapter 1 . 7/9/2013 Loved it and would love it if you continued...thanks for you and July |
| chariot82 chapter 1 . 7/9/2013 WOOOOHOOOOO! Favorite line (or one of them) "But if I'm going to ruin it, I'll do it with all the flair I can." Flair indeed, Miranda. That kind of unresolved I can deal with, but if you'd like to do a follow-up who am I to protest? :o) |
| Trudy Rulez chapter 1 . 7/9/2013 Oh how I love the all ends well sexscene. I loved this story more. Great how Andy fell into Miranda's orbit and fetched coffee like a pro. I love your Mirandy interaction and can only hope for more writing Mirandy going out of control. Thank you so much for writing and sharing. I think you have great talent. Somewhere there was a scene in a Japanese restaurant that reminded me of the movie "i've heard the Mermaids singing" by Patricia Rozema. Could have been hilarious to let Miranda comment on the sea-urchin digestion. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/9/2013 Uh...wow. I love how you kept Miranda and Andy true to character. Luscious. |
| Awayfan chapter 1 . 7/9/2013 Oh wow this is one of the best short stories I have read in a long time. It would be great if there was a follow up story. |
| therealcoshieville chapter 1 . 7/9/2013 I like this - a lot! |
| jh728 chapter 1 . 7/9/2013 Outstanding. I loved the whole thing. And your title was perfect (once you explained). I will definitely be reading this again and again. Thanks for the read. |
| martha-brazilis chapter 1 . 7/9/2013 Thank you for this story. Original plot line and Mirandy inside and out. Thanks again and regards from Brazil! Martha |
| Kthac chapter 1 . 7/9/2013 Absolutely brilliant! Loved the slow build and the characterisation of both Andy and Miranda. Hoping for a happy continuation of equal length without much angst. Long, well-written stories are my all-time favourite thing - better even than cookies. Thanks for all your hard work. |
| ea-phoenix chapter 1 . 7/9/2013 Wow. Just enough angst and sexual tension to keep me on edge without becoming annoying. That was great. The ending gave enough that I can assume what happens next (having read nearly every Mirandy story out there) and it's clear that they're going to start up a lasting relationship, but I'm NEVER opposed to a good follow-up, if you so choose. It's something I would definitely read. Again, good job! |