|Reviews for Crimson and Clover|
| BlackStormReborn chapter 1 . 11/24/2015
Sinking in a submarine
| Calliecature chapter 1 . 11/15/2015
This story is meaty but lengthy, meaning any emotional response I get is lost by the time I'm in here in the review. Nonetheless, I'll gather the gist.
Setting of the story is well-placed, describing the horrible weather, we see Ms. Pauling's professional caution and then Scout's brightened expression at seeing her.
Although she hardly notices him in TF2 comics and I doubt she would that be responsive, this story slowly develops their relationship, targeting her carefully wrapped personal thoughts and Scout's open, easygoing nature.
The one about Scout's Ma defeating Saxton Hale made me laugh and how Spy seeing it as part of her charm.
You explored their characters well that TF2 wouldn't do since they focuses more on the plot (although the one about Sniper's family in the comics was well-done).
Thank you for writing this :)
| Britty-Neko chapter 1 . 8/17/2013
There's no more? There should be more this is too cute :D
| Kimberly Cleo Sincerely chapter 1 . 7/10/2013
OMG I loved this I think you captured the characters perfectly when there in a more social area. It just seems like something that would happen. Job well done.
| R. A. Xip chapter 1 . 7/9/2013
MMmm I loved this one. The only thing I might have added was more detail inside the apartment (it took me about halfway through to nail a mental layout, but I got it okay). And is her apartment on TF Industries property? That's interesting. Awesome story-I love me some SpyXScout's Ma.
I think my favorite thing about this one is the anxiety you were able to create in the reader when Pauling overhears Scout and his mother talking. For us, we know that Pauling has feelings for Scout, because we get to be inside her mind, so it's easy to forget that she actually treats him more or less like a grunt most of the time. I had this feeling of impending doom when I realized Scout was being talked out of pursuing a relationship.
Your fanfiction makes me nerd like a basket case. UGH
| idotpart1 chapter 1 . 7/9/2013