Reviews for Feelings
jack63kids chapter 1 . 3/18/2014
Oh that was unexpected! Clever you. And a little bit more of the wonderful relationship between our boys.
johnsarmylady chapter 1 . 7/10/2013
Nice description of the changes wrought by their friendship
mattsloved1 chapter 1 . 7/9/2013
Oh, so lovely and I really like how you used each of the words. A pleasure to read, thank you. :-)
MapleleafCameo chapter 1 . 7/9/2013
Oh that was excellent!
'He does not make a habit of examining his feelings.' What a great opening sentence! Sets the whole thing up nicely!
'he'll let himself dip into that well-locked bank of emotion' - another feely image!
'But now, in a matter of days, his work is undone. And here he sits, examining and feeling' I love that you repeated italicized feelings - you can almost see the distaste he has for them!
I loved your ending which I don't want to give away!
James chapter 1 . 7/9/2013
Oh, goody - you are getting into the 221Bs. Hopefully this means you'll be writing more and updating plenty?

I like this one. A lovely character insight. I love how you leave it open for the development of his emotions and explain how he is starting to lose control of them.
mrspencil chapter 1 . 7/9/2013
An inventive and entirely proper use of the prompts:-)

Nice work.

Mrs P:-)
Arty Diane chapter 1 . 7/9/2013
That was insightful, and the ending was really cute!
haleycat1120 chapter 1 . 7/9/2013
Ooooooo! I love it!
PBIceCream chapter 1 . 7/9/2013
What a lovely character study, thank you!