Reviews for Paid In Blood
Madman on a Bus chapter 4 . 7/21/2013
Ahh!
This is so cliche!
I keep cringing!
Try and make it more original yeah?
And theres a certian extent you can go to before it becomes completly unbelivable.
You're sort of tipping on the edge there...
And you didnt put in a thing where he compares her to Malfoy...
fate's mask chapter 4 . 7/19/2013
nicely done
tsmuckitelly chapter 4 . 7/18/2013
I like it, I've read all three of your stories and look forward to more.
kddr1122 chapter 4 . 7/18/2013
an intersting start. look forward to more
aishiteru naru chapter 4 . 7/18/2013
I like you story
anarion87 chapter 4 . 7/18/2013
good story
GinaKim chapter 4 . 7/15/2013
Only the Durmstrang students are respectful to Harry. He should really scare Dumbledork and the staff and threaten them that he is transferring to Durmstrang. I really wished this is just a betrayal story instead of a time-travel story or alternate universe. Harry's rant against McGonagall was very impressive.
GinaKim chapter 3 . 7/15/2013
Take that everybody! But only Bagman will give him good marks. Dumbledork will give him low marks for killing the dragon and Karkaroff is biased in favor of Krum.
GinaKim chapter 2 . 7/15/2013
Very good chapter. I hope that Lord in Chapter 1 is someone other than Harry. I can't sympathize with Harry if he became evil because Ron the pig and Bushy betrayed him. Revenge, yes. Evil, no.
imnotraven16 chapter 4 . 7/14/2013
excellent story
sanbeegoldiewhitey chapter 4 . 7/14/2013
I intensely hate that Lord in Chapter 1 who coldly ordered his followers to slit their throats. So I hope that was not Harry. I wished this is just a regular story instead of a time-traveler story of some sort or even a reincarnation story. Anyway, so far nobody has given a review for Chapter 1. That is because that chapter is so confusing. And the succeeding chapters do not seem to connect with that chapter. Anyway, I can handle a gray Harry but never an evil Harry. Harry Potter is a redemptive story. So I hope you don't deviate from that. So far though, I like the story. Minerva and the Gryffindors certainly deserved what they are getting from Harry now. But I can not understand Daphne's anger towards Harry. I re-read their scene in Chapter 2 and I could not find the passage where Harry compared Daphne to Malfoy.
narutoDkurosaki chapter 4 . 7/14/2013
Hmmm...so this is a time travel story huh...there are very few of them with a haphne pairing that the authors stopped writing it or they suck royally and I hope that this fic doesn't become a typical time travel story where at the end someone or the other know that the person has time travelled and another thing about a HP fic is that when harry becomes independent and free from his manipulations he goes a becomes a prodigy in the dark arts or he becomes an animagus and whatnot I hope you don't do that man...make him different man have him use that parseltough of his man no one uses it and even in canon Dumbledore was different and had a Phoenix and voldemort had his dark arts and nagini but harry had a stupid owl and...nothing I hope you use snakes man cause his wife is snake no...have you ever heard of the anime naruto if you heard of it there is a character in it named orochimaru if you compare him and voldemort they should have been brothers and orochimaru was even insaner than voldemort and he used snakes for his attacks he is a reference if you ever use the parselmagic
xXxAngel-With-A-ShotgunxXx chapter 4 . 7/14/2013
I really enjoyed this chapter. There's just one thing ... Where does Harry compare Daphne to Malfoy?
sanbeegoldiewhitey chapter 3 . 7/13/2013
Very impressive performance on the part of Harry. I bet the Veela is so impressed with the "leetle boy" that she is very aroused now.
sanbeegoldiewhitey chapter 2 . 7/13/2013
Your Harry is very calm and collected. I hope he has a good plan for those who betrayed him - the students and the teachers.
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