Reviews for Paid In Blood
MavtheMustang chapter 2 . 5/30
Ugh, i don't care that he went back in time to save her ass, she wants to be a little cunt towards him, then you should have him rip her apart until she drops that attitude.
Sir Anger chapter 2 . 5/30
Why are you using dashed instead of quotation marks it makes it impossible to read...
GoPoe chapter 28 . 5/30
I'm not really sure how to feel about the last few chapters but I liked everything before that. Spelling could use some fixing but overall not bad.
USA-Jeanette chapter 16 . 5/20
Balled my eyes out... dang onion ninjas
aviralm007 chapter 16 . 5/20
reading it for the 5th time..I had to comment now... because everytime i read this story i think that i won't be amazed this time... starting chapters were awesome but this one... chapter 16. Man i tell you... you have no idea what masterpiece it is... you can literally feel the emotion in the words.. those ninjas sure did a good job... and the final linesi gave them the dark lord they wanted so badly'... goosebumps man.. awesome
Caliban03 chapter 28 . 5/17
I liked this "Dark Harry" but still not so "good in a way"
and the twist of houses too
Nice story so far
Thank you for sharing :)
Esmeralda Riddle chapter 4 . 5/3
Harry the Hothead -snort-
Guest chapter 16 . 4/23
Man, those onion throwing ninjas were so slick. Didn’t even notice them until I was sobbing like a baby.
Acidflame chapter 16 . 4/23
I'm crying, happy and sad tears.
It's so good yet so sad this chapter.
Acidflame chapter 15 . 4/23
"I WILL KILL THEM!"

John Wick popped into my mind with this line
Should have been...

"I'LL KILL THEM, I'LL KILL THEM ALL!"

So much emotion in this fic, I'm loving it, it's 2 stories for a single fic Noice.
ThermiteHawk chapter 16 . 4/16
Absolutely fantastic story. Has to be underrated. Felt more emotion reading this story than I have in 7 years. I’ve only read half the story and I still have felt more emotion than anything else I’ve ever read, fanfiction or otherwise. Minor verb tense and word ordering errors but it doesn’t take away from the story at all. Absolutely amazing.
magnoliarossa chapter 28 . 4/15
Thank you, I loved your story and cried a lot (but it's OK), kudos!
Guest chapter 1 . 4/14
An interesting idea but written so poorly that it is barely readable. A real shame
sao for life chapter 28 . 4/12
I'm in love with this story! Very few of the time travel fics I read (which is all of them over 100k words) have the sheer detail and darkness yours did to justify its time travel and your history changes were quite nice as well this is an amazing fan fiction well done
fusion721 chapter 18 . 3/24
wow! that was very quick! I'm going to assume harry had something to do with this?
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