|Reviews for Invincible|
| NinaKaitoConan chapter 1 . 7/11/2018
wow I don't know what to say...
| Kebchii chapter 1 . 2/2/2018
Truly magnificent. Writers like you is what I aspire to be. Thank you for writing this.
| Khythe chapter 1 . 6/29/2017
there really are not enough comments on how well you write. most authors on here write like there just finished the figurative language benchmark in 8th grade language arts. But you, you have a firm command over the use and artistry of the English language. you haunt mastered it yet, but butter than what I have seen for the most part. the only thing that parallels your writing ability is your storytelling. You breathe life, emotion, and feeling into these two dimensional characters (pun intended). The emotion and passion feels REAL, and more importantly, everything makes sense. quite a beautiful work of art, by far a cut above most other stories I've read. take pride, for my praise doesn't come lightly.
| Godschildtweety chapter 1 . 6/9/2016
| Feather-Crowned Queen chapter 1 . 5/28/2016
This is a wonderfully written story! I love it very much!
| Kelly chapter 1 . 10/22/2015
Great fic. Keep writing. I love to see more about these characters.
| he is naughty chapter 1 . 3/31/2015
i like ua narration keep it up n if possible make a sequel! cant wait for works from such wonderful author
| ErinAR chapter 1 . 1/22/2015
I love your writing style!
| MelStitch chapter 1 . 8/7/2014
Oh my gosh! I love how you added another scene after the lemon bit. Most writers end it right after. It was really sweet and I loved it. :)
| Emarose chapter 1 . 7/8/2014
Ah! It's fantastic. Love it.
| greenribbon2402 chapter 1 . 3/9/2014
Wow this was just wow... I 3 IT
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/21/2014
I'm sighing at your fic because you write it wonderfully. I'm floored yet again. Honestly didn't think that such a tiny, unknown fandom could have such great fics!
(you give me hope for small fandoms. :P)
| Pencil Samurai chapter 1 . 12/15/2013
...beautiful. Is was excellent.
| KNSAnimeFreak chapter 1 . 9/9/2013
Please continue this one... It's really Awsm...
| finalps3 chapter 1 . 7/30/2013