Reviews for Of Red, White, and Blue
Scar.Vale chapter 9 . 11/10/2015
I personally agree that the last chapter was a little rushed. This chapter also shows a little more how Clark starts to realize his feelings for her even though he tries to ignore it. I'm a huge fan of the Wonder Woman and superman ship so this chapter had a positive outcome for me.
ULTIMATE POWER COUPLE chapter 2 . 11/10/2015
Its awesome plz try to write long chapters
clardiabru3 chapter 8 . 7/14/2015
What an awesome story. Love love the connections and disconnections between Kal and Diana. I really love that you have given Clark some sass...he is always referred to as the boy scout and it's nice when FF writers give him some spit and fire. Keep up the great work...don't worry about how long updates take...although I can't wait for your next one...we all have our moments of inspiration and then that slippery slope of writers block...I have been in mine for quite a while now...have stories up in the air and others in limbo...due to life's unforeseen circumstances and writers block...but I see this as a sign that the gem's that are our chapters need a little more polishing before allowing them to shine for the world to see...BTW I know exactly how you feel about first review from them was like finding finest moment so far in FF world hee hee...don't pay attention to the haters as Taylor said haters gonna hate hate hate...just shake it off and know that our stories are our own creations and may be based off or be our interpretation of that particular character...but that is the beauty of FANFICTION...we do not own characters or their is our creative take on them and how we see their world...apologies for the long winded review but had to let you know to keep doing what you are passionate about and the only voice that matter's most is YOURS...
ManSinha chapter 8 . 7/11/2015
A lot of angst to start out with and I am not sure Diana would brazenly change in front of Kal given the status of their friendship especially with Kal trying to get some cheap thrills. Somehow that seems a little bit out of character. The "date" was nicely written and yes the ending on a cliff hanger was out of the blue - I am sure you will expound on it next chapter
Guest chapter 8 . 7/11/2015
Reading too much of shidney sheldon's books i guess that is why you like to make diana a victim. And diana can change her clothes via magic so this chapter is total idiotic but why that would be surprise when it is written by some dumbass person who maybe never read comics only getting information from wikipedia of the characters
Guest chapter 3 . 7/9/2015
Stories good so far. But wonder woman doesn't have super hear g nor can she move like the flash or superman. Otherwise good story
fan chapter 7 . 7/6/2015
oooohhh. interesting. i cant wait for the next chapter.
Guest chapter 7 . 7/6/2015
Looks like you are reading too much of harry potter because this kind of arguing is only saw between ron and hermione and that is one idiotic example of relationship and you are making same in here
waveyxai chapter 7 . 7/6/2015
It's good that you're back, I absolutely love this story and the fiery relationship between Clark and Diana
ManSinha chapter 7 . 7/6/2015
This is Kal-El definitely out of character. As the usual knowledge goes if he is written as growing up with the Kents on earth, then he has the good character and values instilled in him. This snooping around is more Batman's style and it would be akin to stalking really. Plus you refer to Diana as being made of clay whereas in the New 52 she is not. I realize you are building up a backstory for the Prelude you wrote in chapter 1 but still...But a big thank you for picking this back up again.
Guest chapter 6 . 12/11/2013
Hell yeah, please keep on writing this story. It's too good not to continue with it. I am hoping to see more chapters before Christmas
JemCow chapter 6 . 12/10/2013
so far so good :)
LoLana chapter 6 . 12/9/2013
Great writing, hopefully this won't be abandoned! ! The dynamic between the two is great, superman needs to be put in his place and Diana needs to calm down a bit from training, your portraying it very well! !
Guest chapter 5 . 12/9/2013
Why do you have Superman acting like a jerk?
Nightwing 509 chapter 2 . 12/3/2013
I like the way you have Clark & Diana getting to know each other. Please update soon.
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