Reviews for Of Red, White, and Blue
ManSinha chapter 8 . 7/11/2015
A lot of angst to start out with and I am not sure Diana would brazenly change in front of Kal given the status of their friendship especially with Kal trying to get some cheap thrills. Somehow that seems a little bit out of character. The "date" was nicely written and yes the ending on a cliff hanger was out of the blue - I am sure you will expound on it next chapter
Guest chapter 8 . 7/11/2015
Reading too much of shidney sheldon's books i guess that is why you like to make diana a victim. And diana can change her clothes via magic so this chapter is total idiotic but why that would be surprise when it is written by some dumbass person who maybe never read comics only getting information from wikipedia of the characters
Guest chapter 3 . 7/9/2015
Stories good so far. But wonder woman doesn't have super hear g nor can she move like the flash or superman. Otherwise good story
fan chapter 7 . 7/6/2015
oooohhh. interesting. i cant wait for the next chapter.
Guest chapter 7 . 7/6/2015
Looks like you are reading too much of harry potter because this kind of arguing is only saw between ron and hermione and that is one idiotic example of relationship and you are making same in here
waveyxai chapter 7 . 7/6/2015
It's good that you're back, I absolutely love this story and the fiery relationship between Clark and Diana
ManSinha chapter 7 . 7/6/2015
This is Kal-El definitely out of character. As the usual knowledge goes if he is written as growing up with the Kents on earth, then he has the good character and values instilled in him. This snooping around is more Batman's style and it would be akin to stalking really. Plus you refer to Diana as being made of clay whereas in the New 52 she is not. I realize you are building up a backstory for the Prelude you wrote in chapter 1 but still...But a big thank you for picking this back up again.
Guest chapter 6 . 12/11/2013
Hell yeah, please keep on writing this story. It's too good not to continue with it. I am hoping to see more chapters before Christmas
JemCow chapter 6 . 12/10/2013
so far so good :)
LoLana chapter 6 . 12/9/2013
Great writing, hopefully this won't be abandoned! ! The dynamic between the two is great, superman needs to be put in his place and Diana needs to calm down a bit from training, your portraying it very well! !
Guest chapter 5 . 12/9/2013
Why do you have Superman acting like a jerk?
Nightwing 509 chapter 2 . 12/3/2013
I like the way you have Clark & Diana getting to know each other. Please update soon.
HELLACRE13 chapter 5 . 10/5/2013
LOL. Those two...they just need to kiss already.
cew1088 chapter 5 . 10/5/2013
Great chapter. Usually I'm a BM/WW fan. My problem is that you making batman such a dick these last chapters. Love the scene with Hal.
Guest chapter 4 . 9/15/2013
I would like to see all of it. Wow, you're in high school? You're a terrific writer. I like Kal and Diana being rivals for the moment. It shows how much Kal is attracted to her even though if he doesn't realize it or not, but I would like to see more of this story though.


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