|Reviews for It Was Supposed to Be a Dare (A Larry Stylinson Fanfiction)|
| Sara chapter 17 . 9/29
Pleeeaaasseeee write more! I LOVE this fanfiction! Please please please please! 3333
| Harry lover chapter 17 . 9/16
Nice story! You have very much fantasy.
| person1 chapter 17 . 9/13
that was good but why stop it ther! so you can get someone to write it for you!
| LARRY AF chapter 2 . 9/4
"hes staright" BULLSHIT
| LARRY AF chapter 1 . 9/4
HUNNY YOU GAY. GAYER THAN TWAIMZ (my friend gave me the twaimz bit) IM SO LARRY AF IT GURTS
| Guest chapter 17 . 8/30
You have to do another one I'm diying right now
| ThEnd chapter 7 . 8/23
Liam's probably gay
| Guest chapter 17 . 8/7
That was really good I loved it and I usually hate reading and I'm really slow at reading but I read all 17 chapters in half a day lol
| Guest chapter 8 . 8/4
LIAM IS GAY I CALLED IT
| Guest chapter 7 . 8/4
| lizz chapter 5 . 7/31
that bastard bit me! lmao
| Lizz chapter 4 . 7/31
It's so weird how people can take things so wrong... This is amazing!
| Brydie chapter 17 . 7/19
Hi I know its been like 2 years but if you read this can you please right a sequel I would really like it.
| Newt Gingrich chapter 17 . 7/14
I must say, I am appalled. This fanfic was nothing short of atrocious. I have read plays written by balding middle-aged acting teachers who could never make it big and like to screw around with their students that are better than this pile of trash. There were so many moments that had absolutely no potential, and a very few that had the tiniest bit of hope that was instantly crushed by your amateur writing abilities. I thought that Liam could actually be an interesting character until he turned into "just another gay guy in this boy band." Your foreshadowing was completely unnecessary and the curveball of Louis having a uterus was just too much. Like, why did you feel the need to do that? And since when did men's bodies sprout vaginas? You clearly have not done your research, and as an incoming freshman at a world famous medical school I know that some of the things in this fanfic are simply not possible. Also, Louis and Harry went from being straight to like maximum two weeks later being gay lovers and not only that suddenly Louis has a vagina, but that's okay because Harry's gay exception is that he likes vaginas on guys. Who knew that he was into that? The only thing that made sense in this whole fanfic is an explanation of why Zayn decided he had to leave the band, obviously due to how uncomfortable he was with the others having gay makeout sessions all the time while he was in the room. Zayn had real potential in this story and you completely ignored the opportunity to give him a compelling plot line.
Now, don't let this review come across as homophobic, I like gay people as much as the next person, but like, four out of the five members of one direction are gay? Come on. Did they get together in the first place because they are all gay or what? I think next time you write a fanfic you should do it to produce quality work instead of to fulfill your weird and creepy sexual One Direction fantasies.
| Guest chapter 17 . 7/2
I LOVE THIS PLEASE HELP I SCREAMED AND FELL OFF MY BED THIS IS GREAT THANK YOU FOR BEING PUT ON THIS EARTH WITH YOUR BEAUTIFUL WRITING SKILLS AND SORRY IF ANY OF THAT SOUNDED REALLY WEIRD OR AWKWARD OR PERVERTY BUT IT WAS GREATTT