Loved your book dude. Maybe you could make possible future strories for Reyna and Percy just to give us something more to read?

You should really continue this story into another book

Honestly a terrific story, I just discovered PJO fan fiction and I’m loving it. Great story!

Ending was pretty shit, ngl.

Other than that, good job.

This was amazing but I wished it would show how Percy managed to write that at the end.

Great chapter, did you use Rey like from star wars?

I think your first chapter was great, also did you use a new hope from star wars?

Got to love bill the merman

WTF? I loved the story but that ending is just bad.

. Its a wonderful story. And i am sad it had to end.

Sucky ending. Felt like I wasted my time reading this for that sack of shit ending. Won’t be reading anything else for that reason.

Usually whenever I read a story, I generally have a part of me telling me to ditch the story and find a new one. BUT WHEN I STARTED READING THIS, I DIDNT REALIZE THAT THE STORY ENDED UNTIL I READ THE AN. YOU HAD ME HOOKED RIGHT TILL THE END! I was not thinking about anything else! Thank you for this. It helped me get my mind of certain things

So Great!

bro... this was soo fucking beutiful and the fact that you just ended it thier pissed me off so much, can you atleast make a part two where you tell us how they were found plz plz plz plz plz plz plz its just sooooo goood pleaaaase do a part 2

Its Reyna Avila Ramírez-Arellano not Reyna Cato