|Reviews for Secret Meetings|
| nomask chapter 1 . 12/30/2013
Lovely story. Thank you for writing.
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/16/2013
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/9/2013
This story is awesome and your writing is superb. I hope you write more stories about Mai-Hime. These fandom seriously needs more fine writers like you or it may die due to lack of good stories.
I actually like the little bit of angst...it made the ending sweeter :)
| Wolf Brigade chapter 1 . 8/29/2013
Hi! To be honest, I only found this story because you reviewed mine. I can't believe I missed this! I've become enamored with one shots and this one is pretty great. In a relatively short piece, you were able to capture both of the girls' personalities. I like your writing style; it's very clean and composed (if that makes any sense) and the dialogue is realistic. If I have to offer any constructive criticism, I'd guess it would be to change these three lines
'However, for one reason or the other, Shizuru did not regret the day Natsuki found her. Of course, this was something she did not tell the other girl. She knew that Natsuki was all about privacy, and was therefore ecstatic the day other girl decided to share a portion of herself as well. '
Since the story is entirely from Natsuki's perspective, these lines kind of out of place since this is the first and only time you go into Shizuru's thoughts. It's a really small thing but something I keep in mind when I attempt my own one shots/read other people's. Still, as I said, I really enjoyed this and hope you continue to write some more Mai Hime stories!
| shiznat13 chapter 1 . 7/28/2013
awww .. i love it
| Renkhal chapter 1 . 7/25/2013
I definitely don't see a reason to change a single thing about the content of this short. It would have been amazing to see more, but I also see the plus of having this stay short. Good work.
| Francia13 chapter 1 . 7/16/2013
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/10/2013
i realy like this story
its so cute
| Unknown chapter 1 . 7/10/2013
Haha, I love this.
At first, I was worried that this story would have an open ending because I noticed it was complete and a one-shot before reading it. I am so glad it isn't those kind of stories that leave you hanging though.
This is definitely going to go on my "reread list"
Until then, I'm looking forward to your future works :D
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/10/2013
so sweet . 3
| Guest123 chapter 1 . 7/10/2013
One of the best one-shot I read. Thank you for sharing your story :)
| Erza chapter 1 . 7/10/2013
Wow... One of the most beautiful story i read soo far! That story, even if it was't as long as the movie "step up" it gave me way more émotions and it was 1000000x way better than the movie! Seriously! I can totally imagine them in my head! Plus, i like the fact that they r not too much OOC, instead it really suits their personnality! I hope to have the honor to read other stories from you and be sure i'll review each one of them :)
| Platina GF chapter 1 . 7/10/2013
oh, wow, such a lovely story! thank you:)
| chum-sa chapter 1 . 7/11/2013
Wow!i think it's great short story...I like it.
Thank for sharing this story.
| Fangshen Gin chapter 1 . 7/10/2013
This is good for a one shot! I like it!