Reviews for The Demon's Daughter DISCONTINUED
DevilishNoble chapter 1 . 8/20/2014
Early Sunsets Over Monroeville! It's funny bc I was listening to my MCR playlist and this song came up when Rayne began singing - Isn't it about the Dawn of the Dead or something? Or there's a girl you just worship because she's like absolute perfection?
GreyFox2290 chapter 1 . 8/15/2014
where are the rest of the chapters? I swear there were at least 16
SarahBloomSakura chapter 1 . 2/19/2014
Oooooo :o i likey :) I really like this story so far :D i sooo can't wait for the next chapter. Oh, i got two questions for yah if you don't mind... 1) will Laurel stay in Black Butler for the rest od her life or is she going to there for a little bit? 2) So this is a part 2 for question #1, So since shes gone would she be considered dead in the real world, or does time stop there? Wait, Nate and them weren't born then, but still, ugh confusing xD
WeirdySpeck chapter 20 . 2/18/2014
Ok so here are some blankets I need to lay down right now, WHY MUST THE BABY DIE? I literally can NOT take that pain, like the baby was smart and cute (In my mind atleast) with the smirking and the knowing like that baby knew stuff it shouldn't! Next blanket, is a huge bitch slap to you (is that word not appropriate for strangers? It should be) you are an amazing writer and you should know that! (Besides the short chapters, that's basically what you need to work on, just saying) Like I don't know how or when I'll get the chance to read the rewrite of this but if I do I will hug you so much it will make Grell's hugs look like pinching. Like seriously, the grammar, it's good, the way you know how Sebastian, Ciel or Grell speak and wrire their own sentences as if it was theirs because of the way you change and understand and most importantly the love is enough to go aw and you do not make characters overeact to much to something like love (I'm clapping for you Sebastian) so yeah, awsome.
MsGeekNerd chapter 20 . 2/13/2014
I get that. I've put my whole account on hiatus until I rewrite EVERYTHING.
taramegareader chapter 14 . 1/9/2014
Ashlyn or Julian
MsGeekNerd chapter 19 . 1/2/2014
Hey, I'm too lazy to log in because my computer will take forever to load everything. But I do like this chapter and I get that. My fan fictions are terrible and I'm in the process of rewriting my black butler fic... Ugh...
Brianna chapter 7 . 1/1/2014
I love Sleeping With Sirens and the song If You Can't Hang is my fave song and instantly knew that that was the song from he one line from the song you put in chapter 7
GreyFox2290 chapter 19 . 1/1/2014
OH MY GOD! do you just hate the poor thing oh my freakin' god... i think i'm going to vomet
Guest chapter 18 . 10/18/2013
This is probably one of the only stories that drives me crazy when i Finnish reading the recent chapters. I love it .
HeyyImInsaneAboutAnime chapter 18 . 9/23/2013
This may seem babyish but whatever:
I wuv it!
Told you.
GreyFox2290 chapter 18 . 9/17/2013
I love this story. Its one of the best ones out there
yukiiii-chan chapter 18 . 9/14/2013
ohhhh! too beautiful story I love it. Please continue.
Little Lady Slytherin chapter 18 . 9/13/2013
ohhhh what's gonna happen next?!
MsGeekNerd chapter 18 . 9/12/2013
Ok so:
1 I'm writing 8 fan fic on this site alone not to mention my original stories I'm working on as well...
2 yes and I succeed at disturbing almost everyone I meet and I'm fucking proud of it! :)
3 I think the women is Laurel's mother... I'm not sure...
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