Reviews for Holding His Breath
Brazilwolf chapter 1 . 5/31
Here is just a lkind suggestion to continue cause it got really interesting. I want to see mako and haru like each other
Aoky chapter 1 . 3/22/2014
Great story make another story please! XDDD
Naiko M chapter 1 . 3/13/2014
Oh my goodness! I love it so much I'd love to see more of this story! Maybe from Haruka's POV? I don't know. Anyways I really enjoyed it 3
RoaringBacon chapter 1 . 1/19/2014
Simple but its very cute and sweet3
BeeTheMagicUser chapter 1 . 10/6/2013
Do you plan on continuing this? You should. It's awesome and so beautifully written and I would love to see how things develop c:
gomogomo777 chapter 1 . 10/5/2013
Now I'm depressed.

Worth it.
numb-butt chapter 1 . 9/26/2013
I really loved how you perceived Makoto's inner thoughts and turmoil and how, by the end of this story, there wasn't exactly a happy ending for Makoto, it really keeps the reality of the situation in place. Good job. :)
Guest chapter 1 . 9/16/2013
Lovely. Poor Makoto.
Guest chapter 1 . 9/15/2013
Oh my gosh- this is simply brilliant. And that last paragraph had me in tears- possibly the most beautiful and poetic two sentence I've ever read. Xx
KamiOokami chapter 1 . 8/29/2013
OHMAIGAWD! You left me in tears over here I really love this first chapter please continue soon!
auriellaa chapter 1 . 8/24/2013
This is so beĆ utiful ooh my godd
Perfidious chapter 1 . 8/23/2013
Very sweet :)
NekoGii chapter 1 . 8/22/2013
/criesinacorner/ Makotooo ( ; ;)
This is so perfect, I can't even. I luv you. So much. My kokoro is going to break.
/allofthekudos/

-NG
RisingXxLawliet chapter 1 . 8/18/2013
Poor Mako
MiyuCat chapter 1 . 8/16/2013
Unng, this was so gorgeous. *_* What a wonderful vision of unrequited love.
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